This is really good Crimsin. Calling the 4 elements

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Light. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I still believe in light and hope for sure. It’s not always easy in present times but yes I choose to hold on to the light.. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.

Damian

In simple terms this is both complex & brilliant .. Neville

Moving work. “Somewhere between the living and the dying”

I really love that line.
Regards
James

Damian, this is the real grit of what poetry can be when told by a poet who knows the dark roads taken by many. I could see the imagery rolling like the driver on a fogbound road headed for the mercy of the night. Each stanza is strong as a shot of whisky at midnight. This is what poetry is all about. I felt this brother. Appreciate you.

John

Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with a musing vibe my friend. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

Excellent write Fia.

Extemporaneous and spontaneous! Your poem has stardust expertly thrown all over it. Akin to a lucid dream, the images and interpretations glide freely about, touching down for a mere second. This is the kind of write that gets better and better the more I read it and allow it to absorb. Fantastic piece, Fia.

Thank you for sharing this
Clay

There’s so much power in a word. How they’re used is where the danger lies…or the beauty. Nope, there’s nothing nonsensical about this