Ghosteen

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March 20, 2025

A simple smile taken for granted Invisible to those watching everyday A wicked seed that was planted This ticking time-bomb doesn’t obey Sinking deeper into this cruel abyss Failed efforts define the next move Hurting others while they reminisce Arguing in the pocket of the groove Outside...

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Fia Naturie
1 year, 5 months ago

Outside the circle all hope is lost. Jump in my circle.
This is good Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. I thought I already did. lol. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Debbie
1 year, 5 months ago

Time is ticking away as we sometimes sink deeper into the abyss. I found this relatable to a great many people. Nice work.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Debbie. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Neville
10 months ago

I felt compelled to come here and find out where you are coming from .. I assure you I was not disappointed but conversely, I was glad I did .. Muchly enjoyed my fine literary friend .. Neville 😎👍
- Damian DeadLove
  10 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m glad you enjoyed the journey. I’ve always let my writes tell their stories. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Neville
    10 months ago
    
    Likewise & sentiment reciprocated .. 😎👍

Fia Naturie
1 year, 5 months ago

This is a beautiful poem. Especially the green eyes.
- Sam Nash
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  when ever I look at any woman, I only see green eyes.. I’m color blind this way
Damian DeadLove
1 year, 5 months ago

Beautifully penned, Sam. Great read, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Sam Nash
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  thank you Damian … I appreciate you being here with us my friend
Sam Nash
1 year, 4 months ago

yes.. it sucks… especially the green color blind

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