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Read MoreNight bore witness to our wild union. It was a hot night along the arched passageway leading into the castle chapel from the expanse of the courtyard. The ancient stone passage was torchlit and our...
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Hehehe go ahead and fantasize! Part Two out tonight or tomorrow morning hahaha 😆
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Erotic writing at its best! You’re a great storyteller, eloquent and creative. This piece is damned hot!!!
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In der Tat, erotisches Schreiben von meiner besten Seite! Ich weiß, dass ich ein großartiger Geschichtenerzähler, Dichter, eloquent und kreativ bin, und dieses Stück ist verdammt heiß!!! So heiß, dass es mich aufregt und ich kann nicht aufhören zu schreiben, Elke. Wie immer, vielen Dank!
Daniel
Gotisch-Surrealistisch
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Read MoreLoves out of order.Imagined fear/terror.Necessary mental response.Collapse of reason and logic.Rise of despair.Sense of hopelessness.What is sleep?Mind always whirring.Suicidal ideation.Nothing but suffering.A smile from a stranger.A speck of light.A lovely thought.Black turns to grey.Grey turns to beige.Some reason returns.The...
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This is an interesting piece starting off one way and flipping it around. That is how life is, right?
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The first one is better in my opinion. Our minds are a battlefield.
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Read MoreForget how to love and learn how to hate. That's my advice for young, audacious writers. Learn to embrace who you really are. Forget the facades that are flattery. Forget gregariousness and learn when to be silent. Forget bullshitting and learn not...
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Sound advice my friend, lots of truths in this write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is sound advice, and I’m pretty sure someone would have needed that.
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Thank you, Adira! Writing this made me feel much like an old wise man… lmao. And I hope I can benefit from it as well and write more inspirational pieces!
Daniel
Gothic-Surrealist
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Read Morereckless understanding, I love painfinding pinpoints of nerves and applying pressureit helps me focus on the deeper things the world spins and I realize I am a part of the mother... Earthevery fiber of my being feels my sibling's painas...
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Every one of us has the power to heal & to harm within us. It’s which course we choose to follow that separates the healers from the rest. Beautiful, Brenda 🧡
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hello lovely Willow this is true it is always my intent to make things nicer it doesn’t always go that way no matter what sometimes thank you for the love on this 💕
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Even with faith we will still struggle. I guess pain is a part of life when it comes. For many, faith has its benefits and joys. For others it’s a fantasy made up by humans. I suppose our minds and how we think plays a big part.
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my faith perhaps is not as strong as others though I do know God I struggle with suffering thank you for your thoughts 💕
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Great write Brenda.
I now realise that pain is quite different from suffering.Most, if not all, our suffering arises in the mind…..
that’s also where peace hangs out.
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hello dearest Benny my mind cause me to hurt with the way I perceive the world… I watch the news and ache with the pain of my brothers and sisters…there is an unrest in me that doesn’t understand such mind scarring events what is the nature of that? thank you for listening 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I deeply appreciate you 💕
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hello lovely Mary good evening thank you beautiful lady most graciously for being so kind 💕
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Read MoreFog drips between brown-eyed susans, enchanted veilof yellow blossoms.Water beads rest upon webs ...
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Phenomenal write, Detritus. Amazing work my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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very beautifully crafted 💕
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Gratitude sounds in the words of eyes that see liminally on the day of the first harvest festival on the wheel of the year.
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Sounds like you’re out at a lake at night. Nice
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Thank you all for your kind words and support! I feel blessed to be part of this site.
Clay
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Thank you both for reading and your comments! That morning truly was inspiring.
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The atmosphere of this awesome poem is magical! Are you from Ireland, Detritus?
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Thank you for the read and the comment, Sappho! I am from east coast usa, though, I do have some irish ancestry along with welsh and Italian.
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There appears to be magic between each of your words: highlighting gently, holding safely, yet – finishing with a subtle flourish. Perhaps your ancestry dictates your broad imagination, sir.
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Thank you Emma! I appreciate the kind words. You may be right about ancestry.
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People seem to think of ancestry as being branded on mind and spirit. But we are all individuals touched by where we go, who we meet, how life loves or brands us. Don’t we use what is at the core and then instinctively react?
Perhaps one has to slip into the distant future to find out?!
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Thank you! Part two coming out by tomorrow morning and things get steamier hahahaha 😆
Daniel
Gothic-Surrealist