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Read MoreIntimacy left the bedroom, drifted quietly down the street. Wanting only human closeness, with no intent to cheat. It wandered past the neighbours, took a shortcut through the park. Noticed couples leaning inwards, who had not lost their spark. It walked backed twenty paces, sat beside a nameless...
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Thanks Damian…..watch out for those Gnomes.
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I love the idea of this, the imagery. The whole gnome part almost, but not quite, adds a whimsy to it. Yet the despair overcomes that brief slide towards “not so bad”. The ending is perfect. The whole write is great stuff.
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Cool write Peter. Very creative.
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Read Moretwinning knots of expression, winding themselves together on the atmospheresouls of no regard, gifting each other passiondeeply reaching into the wealth of the heartfinding thereselves in one anothers eyesfruition of desire long repressedcomes slowly but with a fierce strengthoddly...
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love here ❤️
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I love the way you put this story together. A love intertwined.
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hello beautiful Fia good evening thank you graciously for such a lovely comment ❤️
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Fia Naturie posted in the group Music is Art
I wanted to post two versions of the same song to show, even if the music changes it is still a powerful write
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We had to change our original comment in recognition of your ability to say bodies slapping in an acceptable way. Hahaha, on the for real Lady we love it, it makes us think of slow love. Tight
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Haha you have me dying here, Thank you Me
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Laughter is positive energy Lady, enjoy every bit that comes your way
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This drifts between tenderness and urgent intensity, capturing the physical and emotional in a way that’s intimate without being flashy. I love how the language makes the body feel like both terrain and vessel, with every moment earned and alive.
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Thank you so much. Its not easy to write subtitles and take a person on a journey. Its a skill. Lol
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Passionately penned, Fia. Excellent write, you always deliver the goods my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, cuz, I want to write more of these but being upfront with what you want is perfect too
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Chère F.,
You are being rather harsh on yourself, labelling this as 17. Or you are living in a different part of the world.This kind of love making I learned/learnt from another beautiful lady.
I can only hope that I can get you to rub off on me the way to describe it the way you do.
This is almost French by nature. You can get away with most everything, as long as you mind your language.Needless to say I love it to bits!
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Thank you, I called it We Delve not 17. lol Thank you for appreciating the subtlety of the poem.(almost French huh;))
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hello beautiful Fia so deeoly passionate I have felt this in my lifetime ❤️sexy and powerful write…
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Thank you, so much crimsin.
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Cleverly penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian