Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerful vibes…

Most excellent…

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Tremendous work Brenda. Always a pleasure to read your poems..xo

Apologies…..I never got past the picture of that perfect body.

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We read this off line first, you promised a twist and there are several. He’s not as innocent as the reader is lead to believe, Georgie is truly open to the moment, to good

Yes we’re still here and so glad that she gave him a second and possibly a third chance to improve. Tight read Lady

Please that we caught the next installment, not as we had originally assumed, thankfully. We thought that there was some deception afoot. We find it human adult females feel one way about making love to virgin men but an adult man will actively seek out a virgin female. We really like this piece Lady and always your model selection matches

This is an outstanding poem, dear Abbey! The imagery, the metaphors, the soothing atmosphere – everything is beautiful!

Thank you, my friend.

People often say how beautiful and soft is a rose, but I always saw something deeper and here You’ve expressed it,That’s the strength of the rose, she stays kind in all the ugliness, she yeilds with the hardships… she grows with beauty even in the darkness. a power those only with pure hearts can acknowledge. Thank You for the lovely read my friend.

Thank you, Damian.