You’re amazing with your dialogue. Always enjoy your writing.

I accidentally posted this same submission under A Squirrel. It was pointed out to me and after figuring out how to edit – the right one is up now.
I get loopy sometimes. I keep copies and cut and paste. It went bonkers, but it is corrected.

This is very good.

So well written. This is one of you best. and I remember the pencil writing years, so unsure what to keep and what to change.
It’s good to see and read you here.

Powerfully penned, Ellie. Into the book it belongs! This is an amazing write, thanks so much for sharing. Appreciate you.

Damian

I would have been terrible with the ink and quill. I probably edit everything 5 times (maybe more) and then post and edit more. Nice touch with the
Mobius strip! Haven’t that in awhile! What ifs are horrible? I have deep regrets both of what I have and haven’t done. Doing stuff tomorrow is just…bullshit. Excuses. Excellent piece.

I love that closing stanza, I’ve often thought something similar, solidifying those feelings in ink can be haunting.
Great work.

Paula…..I felt every word of this piece, deep from inside my safe space.
May you be happy, well and free from suffering.

Great write🙏🙏🙏