Omg that little..shit. She lived and he dies and the whole family destroyed because of a kiss that was never going to happen. Wickedly good story

Thanks Fia.

Guys have been getting hurt for centuries over women in some way or another. :/

Paula this is a masterfully written poem. it had me riveted to read what happened next. Suspenseful with lots of surprises. You really engage the reader. Am very impressed.

John

Love is out there. You just need to find it. Lately though love has been held hostage by malicious entities. Great write.

This is why you should stay.

Tears aren’t just for yourself.

🌻

I could feel the emotions in this confessional strongly. You really have the gift of self expression. You are a gifted writer whom I am honored to read here.

John

I hope you stay. You are an important part of our community.

I think you’re good which is why I kept commenting. Good luck either way.

Never give up Lady

Fun read. I liked the cotton candy reference

I would love to fly a kite and climb into a tree house.

Pleasant. Great write.