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    The Adventures of Tex & Blae-Lok - 7

    © 2025The sky suddenly grew dark  --  and very loud! Blae’s feet dug into my shoulder, quite hard. “Ouch.” I said aloud, involuntarily.“Shut up, Tex!” Blae commanded. He didn’t just say it. It was most definitely a command.I shut my...

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    © 2025OlderBy FlatDaddyDays lumber into nibs    nights creak foreverGood times erase themselves with lost memories    bad ones multiply in puddlesPain shakes hands with madness    while elbows wobbleRain falls in my closet    where holes nap on...

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    • I recently wrote a piece about aging too. I visit my mother in her apartment building every weekend and I see others there, just hanging out in the lobby alone. She says they never get guests and that many of her neighbors are jealous of her consistent visitors. It made me sad to think about all the stories sitting in silence. I’ll post it in honor of this poem and its message

    • Well, we’ve gotten here, you and I, and now our elbows wobble. (and all that other stuff) But doesn’t it beat the alternative? Maybe a little Neil Young is called for:

      Old man lying by the side of the road
      With the lorries rolling by
      Blue moon sinking from the weight of the load
      And the buildings scrape the sky
      Cold wind ripping down the alley at dawn
      And the morning paper flies
      Dead man lying by the side of the road
      With the daylight in his eyes
      Don’t let it bring you down
      It’s only castles burning
      Find someone who’s turning
      And you will come around

      • I’m not sure if you got my response to your Neil Young tribute for me, Sam. Sometimes I forget that when replying to a comment, one should click the Reply button directly below the comment to which one is replying. Usually, I notice immediately, then I copy it, paste it using the correct Reply button, then delete my original. But I have the sneaky feeling that I’ve screwed it up other times and come off looking like a shit.

        But I left out of my below comment something I meant to say to you: “Old Man, look at my life, I’m a lot like you only a lot better looking.” Man, that guy sure knows how to write, huh, Sam?

    • Well, Neil Young isn’t my favorite (it”s the voice), but he’s a hell of a writer, so I’ll take this with a big thank you, my friend. And a big Ho, Ho, Ho, too!

    • This one walks like a wounded animal—slow, deliberate, and not asking for pity.
      That rain in the closet and reflection lying flat? That’s grief stripped of metaphor and still standing there, breathing.

      • Damn, Thomas, you nailed it! Uh huh. You always say the nicest things, my friend — and I sure do like the way you talk. Thank you!

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    hearth of language   Set the table, and let the light fall,  cut the bread, cost nothing but time.  Read my face for the story—  for and, or but, yet so—  we keep finding ways to meet.    A few laughs shared,  a lot of pauses filled,  twenty of...

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    A ride to salvation so rudely disruptedI'm looking for revenge on the roadI just got laid off and I'm ready to blow awayThe bloodlust ready to goI can’t make the light till this asshole takes flightMy stabbing hand is...

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