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Read MoreHey there, What’s up?I haven’t seen you in a while.Never figured I would run into you here.You look good. Did you lose some weight?Well, that’s great! Did you ever get married to your sweetheart in high school?Oh. Well, that’s...
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Appreciate it Dampkitten. Thanks for the feedback.
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Well…fuck.. this wasn’t what I was expecting. But damn was it good. Talk about a plot twist! You’ve done it again Vision. I like it! xx
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I do enjoy a plot twist from time to time. Thanks P.G for the comments.
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Vivid and sharp. Very creative.
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Thanks Thomas. Appreciated!
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What have I just read?! Fight club and Identity had a baby poem.
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YES! Great description here M.E. Thanks for the comments.
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WHAT’S THE FUCKING ISSUE?!?
OK THEN! YOU ASKED FOR IT!!Felt this deep. Very creative, Keith xoxo
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Appreciate it Fia. Thanks! xx
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Thanks!
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Fight Club vibes, Keith. The Dr. Seuss of horror my friend. Great write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for the comments. Always…
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Read MoreHere we are at the nighmare paradeafter hours you hear cries in the nightthe shadows fall as you witness ghosts of the midwayliving dolls steal your soulyou dare to ride the haunted carousel?calliope plays mysteriously in the foregroundthe circus...
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Damn, the last line is like a lid slamming down on a coffin after the rest of the poem. Actually a very valid reminder in this world
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Thanks Willow. Appreciate the kind words.
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Wow, this is a wild ride you have taken us on with your poem! Your socially critical observation of this world is brilliantly penned and enjoyable sarcastic!
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Always sarcasm Sappho. Good to see you here.
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Oof! What a haunting vision you’ve painted us with mere words, Vision.
I LOVE IT! xx
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Hello P.G Thanks for the kind words and feedback.
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Always a pleasure dear. xx
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Thanks Adira. Great to hear from you.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This one has grit, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate the comments Damian. Thanks!!
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Read MoreOne day a dog bit the index finger of his masterthe dog ran off with a bloody finger,before the master could catch him the dog came to a river and went onto a wooden dockthe dog looked down into the...
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Phenomenal write, Keith. I should think he would learn from his mistake, and keep the dog fed. Great story my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You would think, but he didn’t. Thanks Damian.
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You have a wild imagination, VOI. I wasn’t expecting a psychotic suicide. But yeah, this is definitely a vision of insanity… true to form!