You told the story of this man with great power and a really strong and surprising ending. You clearly know the art of poetic story telling well.

John

And the moral of the story is…..wait till your sober before going home.

HA! Thanks Adira.

Oh so true sire. Thanks!!

You painted this picture like a scene on television. I like this.

You have a sensitivity and caring for this character that really must come from your compassionate soul. Loved this portrait you painted in verse.

John

Hello Adira. Thank you for the lovely comment. I appreciate you!!!

Thank you HJ Furl. Appreciated!

You paint these people with unflinching description that really makes me feel for them. And there is a slightly humorous tone here which I like. Really find scenes you paint of the underworld of our cities. Love reading your poetry tonight.

John

DARK AND FEROCIOUS.

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.

Appreciate that Thomas. Thanks!!

Yes Gary was a dumbass.
Most of my stories aren’t pretty. I’ll throw some romantic or sexually driven writes but most of stuff is suspense, horror, gore and the outrageous.
Appreciate the feedback.

The only point to this was that I wanted to see her shoot her head off her shoulders. I lost 50, because she shot part of her head off.