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Read MoreMy mind escapes my thoughtsThe waves crashAs I burnThe ocean coolsSerenity is what I yearnThe tide comes inAs I go outThe air filled with hopeI scream, no one hears me shoutA pleasant day here on the shoreI'm steeped in...
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Appreciate the comments Thomas, Thanks!!
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Absolutely beautiful poetry.
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Hello Alexandria. Thank you!!
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Yesssss! The ocean is the cure. Beautiful homage to nature’s healing powers.
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Always the cure. Thanks Pinkdreams.
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Beautifully penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian.
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Read MoreWhat happened to your bodyYou used to be so good lookingIt looks like a storm ripped through your eyesLike you were rung out to dryPasty, dry skinSagging, paint peelingWhat?No shitCrystal Meth?That shit tore you upYou look like you've been...
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When you look
Almost
Alive
Are definetly
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I don’t know who said it but I know that I heard it somewhere. Thanks PAR.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Addiction will take everything a person was or ever will be. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Absolutely. It wears you down till you have nothing left in you. Thanks my friend.
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Read MoreYelling cursing, noise level terrorThen he hits herShe criesThings get quiet, then it starts againLocked in his room, the boy sits on the floor next to his bedThat's the place he goes when they go at itMother & Alien,...
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Excellent work.
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Thanks Thomas.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks Damian.
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Read MoreYour body is limited by ropeEyes of fear, as your molested & gropedGo ahead, try it, you can't moveHeart pumping so fast, you do not approve He asks you if he can pound your assIt doesn't matter, as he rams...
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Gritty, raw, and darkly lit. A kind of almost macabre view of a horror scene. You write the dark with great dexterity, my friend. Truly well illustrated.
John
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Thank you my friend. Appreciate you
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Sounds like a horror movie to me my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I love some gruesome horror. Thanks Damian.
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Some bodies are limited by hope…
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Thank you PAR.
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Read MoreCheckout at the marketThere she is21 years oldDropped out of high school at 16Baby in one armFive year old at her feetTwo different fathersThey both left as soon as they knew she was pregnantShe lives with her mom &...
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Powerfully written, highly realistic, and illuminating poem on some people’s lives. You wrote this so well, my friend. The ongoing tragedy is captured with vivid and clear storytelling that gives the reader a glimpse into what is going on with this woman through observations so clear that I can empathize with her. She seems to be a result of an upbringing that left her lost. And you illustrate this perfectly here.
John
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Tragedy & the dark. As you can see that’s what I love to write about. It comes easy for me to illustrate. Thank you John.
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It is a sad reality for most. But her priorities are fucked! Thank you my friend. Appreciate the feedback!
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Truth be told. Life is often cold.
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Thank you Joe.
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Another write that punches you in the gut. Well done!
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Thanks M.E. Appreciate the comment.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Priorities lead to choices, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That’s the truth. Appreciate the feedback.
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Priorities schmiorities… it is indeed a sad reality for many as Adira stated. But I mean come on??? I’d free bleed if it came down to feeding my kid, something’s gotta give here…
Also hope the POS who gave her the bruises got what he deserved..
Well done my friend, you’re amazing as always!
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Hello P.G Thanks so much for the read and comments. Sadly, this a reality for many in this country. xo
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You did a great job with this, dear Keith! You are a precise observer and fantastic and non judgmental storyteller who léaves it to the reader to make up their own mind. Concerning me, I pity the woman but at the same time I can’t understand that her baby isn’t her first priority. If possible, breastfeeding would be a wise idea to give the child a solid basis for a healthier life. Maybe, just maybe this baby could be the person to break the vicious crcle of violence, poverty and hopelessness.
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Hello Sappho. Options were there for this woman but she chose what mattered for herself, not the baby. You hope the kid has a brighter future, but the % of that is very slim. Thanks my friend.xo
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Powerful work. Excellent.