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Read MoreHere we are at the nighmare paradeafter hours you hear cries in the nightthe shadows fall as you witness ghosts of the midwayliving dolls steal your soulyou dare to ride the haunted carousel?calliope plays mysteriously in the foregroundthe circus...
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Thanks Willow. Appreciate the kind words.
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Wow, this is a wild ride you have taken us on with your poem! Your socially critical observation of this world is brilliantly penned and enjoyable sarcastic!
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Always sarcasm Sappho. Good to see you here.
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Oof! What a haunting vision you’ve painted us with mere words, Vision.
I LOVE IT! xx
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Hello P.G Thanks for the kind words and feedback.
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Always a pleasure dear. xx
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Thanks Adira. Great to hear from you.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This one has grit, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate the comments Damian. Thanks!!
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Read MoreOne day a dog bit the index finger of his masterthe dog ran off with a bloody finger,before the master could catch him the dog came to a river and went onto a wooden dockthe dog looked down into the...
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Phenomenal write, Keith. I should think he would learn from his mistake, and keep the dog fed. Great story my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You would think, but he didn’t. Thanks Damian.
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Read MoreDaddy, come look!!Mommy pointed a gun at her face and fired it!She won't get upDaddy, she's funny looking, come look!
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hello dearest Keith I’ve missed your dark humor 💕
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Thanks Brenda! xoxo
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The relatives are coming. I relate…lol
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Thanks Fia. xo
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Sounds strangely… like my childhood… nice rattling write…
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WOW! That’s an intense childhood. Thanks for the comments LDF.
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Powerful and vivid.
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Appreciate that. Thanks!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Sounds like quite the quandary my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks man.
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F* me! I hear a child’s voice reading it in my head. And BANG!
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You made my day M.E
Love the comment. Thanks!!
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“Sharpness as dull as your life”
Love it.
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Thank you.
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Fucking powerful, Keith. The Dr. Seuss of horror my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks man. Appreciate it!
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Damn, the last line is like a lid slamming down on a coffin after the rest of the poem. Actually a very valid reminder in this world