Thank you kindly.

Powerfully penned, Keith. Another classic write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

In discussing “Metropolis” as a horror film, we reveal not only the fears of the 20th century—mechanization, alienation, control but also the terrors that still haunt us: the loss of empathy, the rise of the machine, and the collapse of humanity in the face of the system. It is a silent, structural, and profoundly relevant horror.

Fantastic poem, Keith.

I do remember this. this line always gets me “He’s obsessed with her death, obsessed with her blood, obsessed with her demise,”
Good piece.

Thank you Fia.

Powerfully penned, Keith. I see the festivities are in full swing for horror month. Amazing write per usual, you’re the Dr. Seuss of horror my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This reminds me of when I get a weird dream that I actually remembered! lol
I always wonder where did that come from. No vodka, no nothing.
Just my mind being dramatic. Lol

Cleverly penned, Neville. Was you possibly seeing double? lol. I don’t drink anymore, but I know the vicinity all too well. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Cheers, what more can I say other than a big THANK YOU .. Neville 😎👍

Superb work.

I like the breaks of “and yet” This is great theme for this month, I enjoyed this.

Thanks, Fia. I am so glad you like the line breaks. I feel that, with certain writes, visual presentation can be important to how the piece is perceived. This is one of those.

I caught the curse vibe in this.
It slowly built up like a possession of his mind and actions
Until it turned into an obsession. I enjoyed devotion in this.

This is a right good salty tale, especially so since it comes from an Air Force dude. (Makes me a bit jealous, it does) Never see the shore again? I know the feeling, but here’s a tip–if you look to that fluid horizon at night, you will often see tiny lights.