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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, S. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Creative and cool LDF…
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Read MoreNo one was harmed during the writing of this poem 1. Cupid had a dateWith a housewife, from midtownHe promised her love arrowsThe devilish cherub only brings her sorrow. 2. M. had an operationThe doctors treated him like a puzzleRe-arranged...
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Cleverly penned, M.E. This is a very witty write my friend, amazing work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you brother! Highly appreciated! “)
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Very creative. Excellent work.
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Thank you, Thomas! “)
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This poem kicks so much ass! I love it! Offbeat, strange, smart, violent..you! I can see this becoming a film. Extraordinary creativity here.
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Thanks buddy! Highly appreciated! “)
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Hmm, no one was wounded, you say. Cupid was shot. lol this is good;)
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I did say that. Its just like movies, when they say that no animal was harmed during the making of this film and then someone shoot a dog or sth, and then some guy chase him and kill him with a f*ing pencil or something like that. To get an action franchise.
I am talking too much. Cupid is a piece of shit in here. And he got what he f*ing deserve.Lol. Thank you, Fia! “)
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You made my day with your sweet comment. I am glad you liked it. Thank you! “)
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This is the first and only piece of yours I have read so far. I must admit, I am intrigued. I stumbled upon you only because you were online (so few are at one time, I have found). But I like it very much; you made me smile with your shots at Cupid, and oh, yes, th little fucker has messed up so many lives, yes? However, I have ulterior motives as well. I am trolling for writers who use audio in their work. We now have a new category for what we do here: Spoken Word, and I am looking for those of us who do that. If so, or you just want to explore the possibilities, hit me back and let’s talk. I think you know HER; aske her about it.
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Thank you for reaching out and telling me about it. And thank for reading my silly scribbles.
Yep, he was. I think I have another poem coming with a Cupid as a victim. (Does it seem like I am vengeful toward it?! No? Lol)“)
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I was trying to get a Spoken Word group going here, but that fell through; however, I did manage to get a Spoken Word category for us when we publish pieces — or edit them — if you have audio embedded on the page. We now have a pretty good start at a Spoken Word library if you check it out. Jut choose CATEGORIES on the main banner, then Spoken Word on the dropdown.
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Moving verse with mystery woven in.
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Thank you! “)
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Broom and
Alexandria are now friends
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It’s for the three word competition. I hope I did it right thanks for looking Adira. Love you girl.❤️
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Just beautiful…
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hi Pete thanks for looking. Glad you liked❤️
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Powerfully penned, Jackie. Phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I don’t think they get any sweeter than you Damian. I appreciate you too.❤️
Jackie
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Intriguing work.
It feels as if it’s going somewhere beyond the cafe.
I enjoyed it.
Regards
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Hi James 🙂
Yeah, they have the new three word challenge 🙂 took me a minute to figure out how to do it like how to submit it lol glad you liked it. Always a pleasure to see you my friend.
Jackie ❤️
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I loved this so incredibly much my friend. The intensity of passion and her sorrow and then the stranger named compassion taking her in his heart just touched mine deeply. I am moved and touched.
John
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Yeah, they have the three world challenge here, John, so I thought I’d give it a try. I didn’t get any traction but that’s OK. I did enjoy how this came out too. Always a pleasure to see you on my page my friend. Love you, bro❤️
your sis, Jackie.❤️
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Read MoreAfter she hired a Professional landscaperto come in and make her fairgrounds hospitableHe still denied her a face-to-face meeting with the bearded ladyOnly to then have the nerve to requestshe play with his super-soakerupon demand…Jsyk, the bearded lady, the...
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this is very sexy and clever 💕
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It’s hilarious is what it is so good to see you Crim❤️🌹 Love you girl more than you think.
Always, your sister, Jackie❤️
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Cleverly penned, Jackie. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian! Glad you enjoyed this silly little piece of metaphors. They are truths to some degree lmao!😂
I enjoy seeing you on my page thank you, brother
Jackie 👍🏻❤️
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I love how you had to clear that up. Very funny. Nice piece here.
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Fia❤️
It’s really nice to see you on my page today,
I hope life has been kind to you. Sorry I haven’t been around much.
Love Your Sister
Jackie 🌹
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Thank you, my darling. I like making these kind of funny little zingers. It’s a series actually I have another one. I’m gonna post later. I’ve only gotten to one and two though it’s a work in progress. It’s always wonderful to see you on my page Adira❤️❤️🌹
Your sister, Jackie❤️
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I love the flow and rhythm of your poems. This is beautiful