Fred – Stars Rite

DampKitten wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Time in a Bottle

Romance, Short Stories, Spirituality

May 15, 2025

20

"How long does she have?" asked the man behind the counter, stooping in his lab coat as he assessed the prescription."The doctor doesn't know. Perhaps a few weeks."The elderly gentleman empathetically smiled, his ocean blue eyes regarding his customer....

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16 Comments
- M.E
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  I didn’t expect it to go that way! I am not into short stories but that was steamy and rejuvenating. Well done, DampKitten!
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you, M.E.! I like to give you the unexpected…
- NAAJIR
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Highly imaginative, Lady
  Full of suspense sexuality and devotion.
  It’s been a while since I have read story telling this good
  Reminds me of the old erotica short stories I used to
  read when I was younger
  
  Great job DK
  
  Naaj
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks, Naaj! I’m so glad you liked it. I was looking for something sweet and suspenseful. I accidentally ran into that internal Hawaiian love story when I was studying the flower and incorporated into the piece. It’s legitimate Hawaiian folklore, and I thought it was pretty cool.
- DampKitten
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Indie, thank you so much for reading and your specific recommendations. I’m sure you realize that the name, Charlie, was specifically chosen to surprise the reader in the way you mentioned – still, I like your idea to make it more obvious when the curtain finally rises on her identity. I’ll check on the parking lot as well.
- DampKitten
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you, HJ! I’m glad you liked it!
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Powerful work. Hot. Well crafted and steamy.
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you, Thomas. I’m glad you liked it.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, DK. A steamy erotic write, with fabulous storytelling, and an incredible imagination my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    You’re awesome, Damian! Thank you!
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Brilliantly written. Well executed. Sex, sex and more sex. This is some hot motherfucking shit!
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Well, hopefully more than just sex – but thank you! I’m definitely into sex!
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Never cease to impress. Always well written and deep (pun intended) lol. The story flows smoothly and hott hott hott 🔥 😋
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you, Daniel. My goal is to impress you and, well… excite you.
- DampKitten
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  I keep missing the reply button!
  I love your comments as always, HJ
- DampKitten
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  So are you, girl, and thank you! No apologies for tears, but kisses for cleanup!
  
  xoxo
DampKitten wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Shade

Poetry, Romance, Spirituality

May 15, 2025

22

By day, we stayas far awayas love allows,one from the other Tonight,I’ll be your motherI’ll sooth the singe of sunlighton your skinA daughter to your darknesstill the end The winter’s frozen fingersseize my soulThe heart you’ve torn aparthas made me whole Allure...

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21 Comments
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  You’re getting good at this😉
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    I’m so glad you think so, Peter! Thank you!
    xoxo
- Poetic Gawdess
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  A beautiful description of the transition to the afterlife. I’ve got chills, morbidly beautiful. I’ve enjoyed this, well done D.K xx
  ~P.G💋
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    I’m so glad you liked it, PG! Thank you!
    xoxo
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  The last stanza, I got the chills. Nice. Xoxo
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    I love giving you chills!
    xoxo
- M.E
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Sheesh! This gave me Bram’s Dracula vibes! Excellent!
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    I’m a huge fan of that movie, though I haven’t read the book. That’s on my bucket list.
    - M.E
      1 year, 4 months ago
      
      Yes! A Beautiful film and book. “)
- Sam Nash
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  oh Peter… you haven’t seen anything yet… this woman is a witch…
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Noooooo!!! Peter! Peter! (pumpkin eater)… I’m a GOOD witch, Peter! I’m the GOOD witch of the North or maybe it’s the South. Shit! Which fucking direction? Come back here! Come back!
    
    Dammit, Sam! I was ‘THIS’ close, and you ruined it. I should never have taken that apple out of your mouth until I was ready to sit on your face.
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  The whole piece is fantastic 👏 and the last stanza is remarkable poetry! Bravo!
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Wow, thank you, Daniel. I love your comments. Truly, I do. Thanks for following me!
    
    xoxoxo
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Dark. My bed sheets will be over my head tonight after reading this. Nice!
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Oh, stop it, Keith. Pull your sheet down. I want to get a look at your neck and… wait, what is this? A tent pole?
    - Visions_of_Insanity
      1 year, 4 months ago
      
      a tent pole is raised at night and in the morning. Come see what lurks beneath my sheets!!
      
      DampKitten
      1 year, 4 months ago
      
      That thing operates just like clockwork
- DampKitten
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Oh stop, Mr. Dragon! Your poetry is amazing… publication worthy. You have incredible depth and vision. I always love you insight on my stuff! Thank you!
  
  xoxo
- Pandy
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Damn girl, you’re good with metaphor. Love that last stanza, it’s killer..
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Wow, thank you so much, Pandy! I’m honored. Thanks for reading!
- Pandy
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  You’re welcome. It was an enjoyable read!
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Forward

Poetry, Uncategorized

May 15, 2025

10

Deep with inA soundEscaped!Catching the airShock and aweCreated the first audienceForwardSymbols and representationsCaptured thoughtOn walls and clayForwardLife ripped from rootsFibrous parchmentCharcoal wordsKnowledgeForwardQuill and inkThin papyrusLines replace symbolsLoops entice the eyesForwardScreens and buttonsGreen and yellowFlashing cursiveForwardTexts, short formsMeanings misunderstoodNew vocabularyEver...

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9 Comments
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Always move forward. Never in reverse. Cool poem Fia.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Right, never go backward. Thank you, Keith
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you, Dragon-fire. I want to know what’s next.
- DampKitten
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  This makes me want to chase down a Woolly Mammoth and scribble my initials on his testicles.
  “We didn’t start the fire!
  It was always burning
  since the world’s been turning!”
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Girl, you hit me up with Billy Joel? Love that song. Dk you know I am 4’11”? I will need an extension later to reach mammoth testicles. You are a little taller than me. You will have to climb on my shoulders. lol
    You are funny. Thank you, Dk., xoxo
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, Fia. Love the flow and the imagery is stellar my friend. Nice spill. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you ☺️ appreciate that Damian
- Poetic Gawdess
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Fia, our world is ever evolving, but it’s refreshing to have you take us through time. Can’t wait to see what’ll come next. Brilliant piece my dear friend. xx
  ~P.G💋
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you P.G. Let us see what’s next
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Release Me

Poetry

May 15, 2025

17

solitude is a self efficient temple welcomed... greeted... like the warmth of the womb... anger is the fuel of turmoil seduced... infused... spawning the words of poets... misery is the darkest mistress beautiful... deceitful... wicked in every manipulation... pain spreading through the veins crimson... suspicion... making colors bleed truth... reunited with the past forgotten spiritual... ritual... skeletons restrained...

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17 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  That was amazing. I love the growly voice. Damian;))
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading/listening and your kind words, Fia. So glad you liked the write and performance my friend. The growl was the only thing vocally I never questioned myself about. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Tremendous work. You nailed it.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading/listening and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you enjoyed the piece my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Cool idea with the vocals and the words are killer. Nice job Damian.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading/listening and your kind words, Keith. So glad you enjoyed the piece my friend. Yeah, it was a way to incorporate with the death growl. Which I thought went well juxtaposed to the spoken part. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Willow
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  I’ve always enjoyed the voices that have gravel in their DNA. This is a little different for you but still 100% you. And brilliant! Love seeing all the facets in different light, my friend
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading/listening and your kind words, Willow. So glad you enjoyed the performance my friend. It took me almost 15 years to be comfortable enough to share these pieces. I have three more, but I can’t find the words to them. lol. I was not in the best place in those recordings, I was drinking like a fish, which makes sense being that I’m a Pisces. lol. But it was different, because I was different. I was not the person I am now. But I’m not afraid to be me anymore, so why sit on the material. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Poetic Gawdess
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Damian!!! Oh Damian, this is….. Wow, it’s not often I’m rendered speechless. I like the transition from your voice to the death growl. Very masculine, very sexy. It’s like that old saying, “two sides of the same coin” I think that applies here…maybe, lol. Same person, two different sides of him but they have the common goal of being released. The death growl was the cherry on top of this beautiful piece. I applaud you my friend! xx
  ~P.G💋
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading/listening and your kind words, P.G. So glad you enjoyed this piece. It does have a, Dr. Jekyll, Mr. Hyde kinda vibe. Glad you loved the growl, very cool. At one time in history it was kinda frowned upon by the masses to death growl growing up. Times change or so they say. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Alexandria
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Very impressive, Damian. I really like your voice and the lyrics were perfect.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading/listening and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you enjoyed the performance my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Nick DC
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Great ink. It had a great flow.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you liked the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- FlatDaddy
  2 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Nice work, sir. I will write more later (I got here in a weird way and wasn’t going to leave a review at all, but I saw at the bottom of this piece there was your audio file — with another that has this piece read (horribly) by an AI voice. You can leave it if you wish, or you can delete it by adding “excludetx” as another tag on the page where you added this piece to your pages. In any case, I’ll be back when I can spend more time here. As a for
  Former performance artist and now a humble poet (well, at least, a poet), I want to enjoy this at my leisure.
  FD
- FlatDaddy
  2 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Nice work, sir. I will write more later (I got here in a weird way and wasn’t going to leave a review at all, but I saw at the bottom of this piece there was your audio file — with another that has this piece read (horribly) by an AI voice. You can leave it if you wish, or you can delete it by adding “excludetx” as another tag on the page where you added this piece to your pages. In any case, I’ll be back when I can spend more time here. As a for
  FDmer performance artist and now a humble poet (well, at least, a poet), I want to enjoy this at my leisure.
  - Damian DeadLove
    2 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Fixed it brother. Didn’t realize the AI voice was even there. Thank you for your kind words, FD. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
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