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Read MoreI walked among the quiet stems, where sunlight touched the earth's hidden gems, and found a bloom, so still, so shy beneath the vast unchanging sky. It spoke no word's, yet told me all of how winds through branches call,...
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Thank you for the kind words and sound advice Meg.
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Nicely penned, Fred. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
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Thank you Damian, greatly appreciated..
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Read Morethere is a place where the sea is still where the waves never speakwhere the sky pulls the light awayand all that remains is quieta wound that refuses to heali stood there onceeyes closed against the saltwaiting for something...
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This is sad, but you write so well. Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you kindly Alexandria, glad you enjoyed it..
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I agree this is sad. Pulled on the emotions well
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Thank you Fia
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Powerfully penned, Fred. A heavy write my friend. Silence contains mysteries, as well as moments of clarity. Appreciate you.
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Thank you for the words Damian, I truly appreciate the time you took to read all 3 of my scribbles my friend…
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Read Morei knock but the door does not open i speak my name into the darkbut even the echoes refuse to answer the walls should hold memoriesbut they are emptyhollow bones of a placethat never wanted me the mirror stands waitingbut i am not...
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Fantastic work.
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Appreciate you Thomas..
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Silence never stays. Nice piece
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Thank you Fia, appreciate the read..
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Thank you Adira, truly appreciate the kind words.
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Powerfully penned, Fred. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
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Thank you Damian…
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That’s really nice, Fred. Love how you use rhyme and imagery.
I’m guessing you’re into ‘silence’ by virtue of your first three poems.
One thing I might suggest is organizing your piece into more traditional stanzas that emphasize your rhyme scheme as opposed to presenting the poem in a classic prose format. You can even play with spacing as such.
This is a strong and thoughtful piece
Meg