I love the build-up, the initial nervousness on Alayna’s part, her relaxation, increasing confidence, their red hot sex! This has to be one of the best real life erotic stories, I’ve read anywhere, Daniel other than my own, of course! I’m thrilled for you, very well done indeed! More, please, mister! Harriet-Jacqui xx

Tomorrow?? We have to wait till tomorrow. This is good, Daniel.

Brilliantly penned, Fia. Excellent storytelling my friend. This is really good. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, Damian;))

Sexy & well written. Nice work Fia.

Powerful work. You bring this to vivid life.

Cleverly penned, Rascal. Excellent write my friend. He’s a walking punchline. lol. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hoi @Rascal
Light verse has a very very special place in the hearts of the Dutch.
There was a time, Some 40 years ago, that I met THE promotor of Dutch higgeldy piggeldies/olleke bollekes every first Tuesday of the month.

So i must have written hundreds of them. Most of them as part of lyrics for songs, almost all of them in Dutch.
And a few in English. One I remember where ‘sustainabiliy’ was the key word. But looking for this one is impossible.

The very long and very impressive artistic life of Carole king, began with ‘O Neil’. An answersong to O Carol by Neil Sedaka.
With that in mind I decided to write an olleke bolleke to you. An answer song or thereabouts.

I
Donald Trump wat is dat
Nog niet genoeg gehad
Tijd voor wat vrije tijd
Dat komt goed uit

II
Wordt geen misdaad geschuwd
Naar de afgrond geduwd
Wanneer is het genoeg
B’donder de kluit

What I like about it, is that it’s full of letters/pronounciations the English language doesn’t have.
I love your poem to pieces. Thank you for posting!
Kind regards, Gus

Love the comically playfulness of the write.

Delightful piece in every way.Quite the opposite of the orange buffoon.
His ascent to POTUS surely must put to bed the notion of an all caring,all loving,all knowing God.
🙏

FUCK OFF!

FUCK OFF!