-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Tim wrote a new post
![]()
Read Morethey've adopted hateas the answer,excluding patiencethey've assignedvile languageas their positionthe drums of warornament speecheswith scornful accentsand so they'll march;they'll refute the enemythey'll interceptand reimbursewith unyielding blamethe lines are drawn;we've been here before.think the 60'sthink Kent stateand the violationof innocent...
4 Comments-
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Much appreciated back, my friend. Thank you.
-
-
![Profile picture of Wally]()
History repeating itself, only now we have phones to record everything and be shocked by the hatred many spew.
Powerful write.-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Thanks very much.
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Tim changed their profile picture
![]()
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Damian DeadLove joined the group
Music is Art
![]()
![Profile Photo]()
-
![Profile picture of M.E]()
M.E joined the group
Music is Art
![]()
![Profile Photo]()
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Monster
Teeth bared
He’s scared
His mind’s a mess
Trying to handle with finesse
But to no avail-this ship has sailed
If it was meant to be-he will return to me![Profile Photo]()
liked this
1 Comment-
![Profile picture of RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS]()
A laudable effort, Fia 👍
I love your imaginative theme and how you’ve creatively made this form your own with your unique touches that catch the reader’s mind’s-eye … enjoyably interesting and entertaining.
Having said that, I’ll also mention a couple of techy issues:
1. Syllable counts are out in L3 & 4 (should be 2/2), and L6 (should each be a…Read More
-
- Load More Posts
Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian