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Fia Naturie posted in the group Music is Art
I wanted to post two versions of the same song to show, even if the music changes it is still a powerful write
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Haha you have me dying here, Thank you Me
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Laughter is positive energy Lady, enjoy every bit that comes your way
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This drifts between tenderness and urgent intensity, capturing the physical and emotional in a way that’s intimate without being flashy. I love how the language makes the body feel like both terrain and vessel, with every moment earned and alive.
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Thank you so much. Its not easy to write subtitles and take a person on a journey. Its a skill. Lol
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Passionately penned, Fia. Excellent write, you always deliver the goods my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, cuz, I want to write more of these but being upfront with what you want is perfect too
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Chère F.,
You are being rather harsh on yourself, labelling this as 17. Or you are living in a different part of the world.This kind of love making I learned/learnt from another beautiful lady.
I can only hope that I can get you to rub off on me the way to describe it the way you do.
This is almost French by nature. You can get away with most everything, as long as you mind your language.Needless to say I love it to bits!
Warm regards, Gus-
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Thank you, I called it We Delve not 17. lol Thank you for appreciating the subtlety of the poem.(almost French huh;))
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hello beautiful Fia so deeoly passionate I have felt this in my lifetime ❤️sexy and powerful write…
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Thank you, so much crimsin.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read More✨ Hello, Stars Rite Community ✨ We’re happy to share that Stars Rite now has a designated space for news and updates. This way, you can stay informed without needing to join a separate group just to find out what’s...
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Thanks for the news, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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Great info, thanks!
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Thank you, Vision;))
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PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) wrote a new post
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Read MoreI At the first breath, the rock split its side for me,and the world fell quiet to hear my stride,for every gesture traced a pale decree,and every trace a pact with the void outside. II I descended through veins where...
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Epically penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! This is a masterpiece of a write with excellent storytelling my friend. I throughly enjoyed this one my brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Postmodern poetry is taking it all over me. I am glad that you appreciate it. Hugs my brother.
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This is some stellar writing PAR. Great flow, with some awesome storytelling.
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Thank you Keith, big hugs my friend!
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This is freaking deep and introspective.
This really got me “still be someone? And not someone?”
I took it as can I still be a person and just not another number.-
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That is correct, Fia — not be just some one.
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Hey, my friend…This one aches with honesty—the kind that doesn’t clean itself up or ask for forgiveness.
It’s messy, human, and brave as hell, the voice of someone still standing inside the wreckage and telling the truth anyway.-
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Thanks, Thomas, this is a very nice review, my friend. And yes, it was difficult to write, but you know how things have been with me lately. I’ve been very circumspect about many things, and this was one result of that.
However, how about a laugh? Check this page or better yet, any of YOUR pages or someone else’s work. You will not there is an option to listen to our poems, even when we did not make or post any audios for them! And they are absolutely dreadful bits of garbage! It’s too funny to get angry about it, especially since it seems to be affecting all of us! The Spoken Word category is gone, too! Isn’t it hilarious? I sent a note to Fia about itt. What a hoot!
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Oh yes…..I’ve heard my poems read by machines…it’s hideous.
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Oh, I’m a sucker for free verse. The way this flows. The unapologetic confessional narrative. This is bold, brave, vulnerable. It is all soul, and I love every line of it. Thank you. Very powerful.
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Thank you for your kind words, Kay-1. I have to admit it: I’m a sucker for praise. “Thrill me chill me fulfill me,” the lady said. If you know where that quote came from, you understand; if not, it doesn’t matter. I don’t think we’ve met, so welcome to my pad. I hope you venture through some of my other work. And let me know if there is any particular piece of yours you would like me to read, but beware: I am honest in my reviews, unless you’re writing about me.
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haha. Lydia Deetz. Beetle is my man, or maybe it’s my childhood crush on Michael Keaton that has me thinking this. He is and always will be my Batman. I digress. I very much plan on reading more of your work. Sometimes I simply read and like, but since I have your permission, I will definitely offer my feedback. You can look at any of my posts and critique them. In fact, I could do with some critique of my last post. I’m thinking of polishing and publishing it. I know it’s rough, and I have thick skin. So do your worst.
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You will note that I already have. And I do hope you like it.
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We had to change our original comment in recognition of your ability to say bodies slapping in an acceptable way. Hahaha, on the for real Lady we love it, it makes us think of slow love. Tight