This is deep and takes the mind to a place that makes you ponder what we are witnessing today, could it be avoided if we just remembered past events instead of letting it just fade into the back ground

Tight rhymes, amigo. Sing your songs, even silently. They still hit.

hello dearest Damian this made me sad the horde is so ficke my friend I feel you ❤️

Well damn. This reads like a whiskey bottle that learned to rhyme. I can practically hear the guitar echoing off brick walls. You really said, “Let’s take a road trip with regret,” and made it sound cool. Brooding in the best way. I’m into it.

A beautifully chaotic board, fitting for a poem about drifting identities, inner shadows, and the erosion of meaning. You’ve written something that feels like a road‑worn blues song fused with psychological noir.

Cool piece. Dark, intelligent & moving.

I got the feel of a New York City late night blues while reading this excerpt of a journey.
C Train, getting off at W 4th St, an urban couple getting frisky and fussy in public, a homeless man marking his territory,
a rat scurrying beneath the 3rd rail as the lone guitarist curates those city blues.

Straight diggin this vibe, D

Much respect

Naaj

“Dark passenger”…now that’s a concept i like to delve into very much. Relating to this wholeheartedly. Maybe a tad too much lol.

I don’t know where this one took others, and I’m refusing to check yet. But to me, this reads as those who are watching evil taking the stage and are documenting what they see. It reminds me of a name much in the news these days, and the vile things perpetrated and orchestrated by him. But that one man couldn’t have done any of those things without a lot of collaboration from a lot of others. Many of whom are currently destroying our world. The blues in the shadows fits this vibe so perfectly. And regardless where it takes people, it takes us, my friend

Beautifully penned, PAR. An excellent write with a catchy flow to it my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.

Damian

This piece reminded me of some psychedelic trip. Visually and lyrically speaking. I need to listen to some Jefferson Airplane! Nice work my friend.

Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write per usual my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you cuz.

Damian

This is so cool its almost hot .. & I luv it too .. 💛

Awwww. Nice love poem Fia!
I need to post something too.
Hopefully this weekend I’ll post one:)

Thanks for the encouragement chica!

It’s so nice to see this! Never enough truly lovely poems anymore. We all needed to read this!
Well done, Fia. Bravo!

Your love,
the kind to be sure of.
Your heart,
best kind from the start.

Little things,
tender happiness brings.
Warm touch,
can never have too much.

Soft kiss,
leads to such wonderful bliss.
Happy eyes,
most loveliest of love’s prize.

Gosh, Fia! 💕
‘Twould seem your warming words have inspired my rugged olde pen to dance with love’s efulgent joy!

No one speaks of love more sweetly than You, dear poetess.
And, how lucky we are to share it … thank you, Fia! ⁓ Richard🖌