This piece turns so well…

Word selection totally opens
up the experience…

Righteous darkness…

Inspiring to me…

I am writing a story
about a group of poets
who commit group
suicide…

Was gonna be three
ladies, who learn
one of them dying…

Inspired by Eerie…

But then I decided
I would need more
bodies to qualify
for:

Group suicide.

Hahaha.

I started the
story in first
person narrative
but I am thinking
of pulling out
of that and going
into omniscient,
if that’s even possible…

🙂

Nicely done Daniel…

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoy these stories my friend. It means a lot to me, and I’m grateful for your continued support. Appreciate you.

Damian

Beautifully penned, Fia. Always dig your storytelling, and brilliant dialogue. Great read my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Tremendous work.