Your fishing is different from mine.😉

I never knew fishing could be so much fun…

Brilliantly penned, Fia. This was a clever and sexy write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Catch anything?

Did you use bait? Hahaha
A beautifully written piece! “)

Sounds very therapeutic 😌 hehe

All I could do was smile at the cleverness of this allegorical vibe.
One of my favorite poetic alleys.
Sexy, sexy

Naaj

Oh that smile says a lot at the end.
Well done Fia.

I need a prayer by this point. And thank you.

Fantastic piece man. Your writing is one long dark journey. Love it!

Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible storytelling my friend. It’s sometimes wild how much power the mind wields. Thanks so much for sharing. Appreciate you.

Damian

These poems are so damn dark and unsettling. GREAT!

Powerfully penned, Daniel. Can feel the honesty and pain my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I like how you ask for forgiveness . Nice Daniel. 😊

Powerfully penned, Daniel. I could feel this one my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I’m hugely impressed with your understanding of poetic element.
So, you are Richard the Rascal. Let me put that down. This is another amazing piece with emphasis on personification and symbolism. There’s obviously a metaphorical significance to the changing season, specifically fall to winter. It’s interesting to note that while you give leaves many characteristics of humans in this piece, they lack the unique capacity for understanding… at least, that’s the perspective of the speaker. Your final stanza is a fantastic summation.

This is top shelf material, Richard.
xoxo

Hi, M’Good Friend! ✌🏼

How great it is, Tim, to be greeted here with one of your appreciatively expressed and inspiringly encouraging reviews, that always seems to grasp my poetry’s core essence.
Yes, like You, I tend to enjoy a good dose of metaphoric imagery in my pieces.

Thank you, Syr, for enjoying this rather sad Free Verse piece! ⁓ Rascal🖌

PS: On your recommendation, I had to check the site out … do you know how one edits their poetry?

Thanks, Buddy👌

Graciously spake, Dear Poetess🥂

Your coaxing words are sweet as honeysuckle to a hopeful bard’s susceptible ear … most especially, from one so poetically accomplished and sophisticated as yourself.
A few devices I tend to favor are color, texture, analogy, simile, and nature … I’m so pleased you’ve recognized their presence in this rather poignant little piece.

Thank you ever-so warmly, Lady DK, for your always welcomed accolades! ⁓ Richard the Rascal🖌