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Read MoreThen Meg paused as she gazed into Daniel's blue eyes pleading, "I hope you have something to soothe the pain, baby." Then she playfully nugded her nose against his, then leaned in for a kiss but playfully...
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Oh that’s hott. Wait till tomorrow for part four, more action in the parking lot under the lightning storm hehe. And you gave me an idea in your comment about my next short story.
Maybe I should have tasted more of yoy on my finger! Surprise coming!
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Read MoreI'm a lover of progressive and psychedelic rock... I like the harmony injected ...
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Beautifully penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! You know I love poems that have talk of music in them. Great write my friend. Love the layout and the creativity, nice execution on the difficulty. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Obrigado, Damian. ❤
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Groovy piece my friend. Lets a take a trip on a magic ocean. Everything will be real fine. Peace to you my dear friend.
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Obrigado, Keith. ❤
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Obrigado! ❤
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Read MoreSome say that tears, when shed, are healing Why don't I feel healed then I can tell you why But will you accept the truth Accepting responsibility and showing that you understand Are the steps to move forward There is a problem here Deep rooted Like an old...
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Superb
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Thank you, Thomas 😊
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Love your spacing… very effective emphasis. Second person narrative is such a powerful literary POV, and you’ve taken full advantage. The conversational tone reflects the overwhelming effort to maintain control. The piece is as much about self as it is situational management, and I think the limited information provided makes it all the more relatable.
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Thank you for letting me know that this is a relatable piece. It is not always easy to publish something that you second-guess yourself about. I really appreciate it, DK;))
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You’re right, and it’s important to defer the temptation of providing too much information. Poetry is frequently vague. That’s what makes it beautiful.
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Thank you, Wil;))l
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Powerfully penned, Fia. There is venom in those words my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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Heavy! Like this a lot.
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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This is incredibly raw and honest. The way you describe the tears as rage, not sorrow, feels so real. Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you for reading this. Poemstar
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Read MoreBiased figures manipulate opportunities Power has reigned since the dawn of time Spitting rhetoric laced with dry ambiguities False sincerity acted out in full pantomime Dreams are aborted before even catching breath Harsh reality of being worked and taxed to death Programmed from a young...
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Love this… great job Damion…
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, LDF. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This post, at first blush, leaves me with what to disagree with. After a second read, and seeing the layers underneath, it is powerful and insists that one consider it on the deeper level. Many thanks and blessings. <3 Echo
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Echo. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fist in the air, I’m over here going “Yeah! And…yeah!” All the way through this one. I remember this one & I’m glad she followed you over. Some truths should never fade into darkness. Favorite line:
Only way to quit the lie is to go cold turkey
That is gold, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I loved that line as well. It ranks high as one of my best in my opinion. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Raw and gritty. Love it.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Totally agree…
We got a shitstorm of rhetoric and meaningless ambiguity to wade through. I remember the term “Double Speak” from Orwell’s 1984. So legitimate. The dude had the future pegged.What we need round here is another Nostradamus and some hymnals.
Great write
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, DK. So glad you connected with the write my friend. He did get some of it spot on, indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Love your raw writing man ❤️🔥
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Poe. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Phenomenal piece Damian. Nice work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That’s a lot of action for a parking lot, babe!
I have to tell you that I LOVE sweaty sex. One of my favorite memories is losing power during a thunderstorm and getting fucked in the bedroom with the window up… rain pouring in on the carpet, but we just didn’t care. It was hot and humid as shit. No air conditioning. No fans. Soaking the bed in perspiration. Glistening. Banging like animals.
And your finger has been up my ass for a while. Maybe you better suck it clean.