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      Taken Seriously: Of Life, Love, And Death

      No one was harmed during the writing of this poem 1. Cupid had a dateWith a housewife, from midtownHe promised her love arrowsThe devilish cherub only brings her sorrow. 2. M. had an operationThe doctors treated him like a puzzleRe-arranged...

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      • Cleverly penned, M.E. This is a very witty write my friend, amazing work. Appreciate you.

        Damian

      • Very creative. Excellent work.

      • This poem kicks so much ass! I love it! Offbeat, strange, smart, violent..you! I can see this becoming a film. Extraordinary creativity here.

      • Hmm, no one was wounded, you say. Cupid was shot. lol this is good;)

        • I did say that. Its just like movies, when they say that no animal was harmed during the making of this film and then someone shoot a dog or sth, and then some guy chase him and kill him with a f*ing pencil or something like that. To get an action franchise.
          I am talking too much. Cupid is a piece of shit in here. And he got what he f*ing deserve.

          Lol. Thank you, Fia! “)

      • You made my day with your sweet comment. I am glad you liked it. Thank you! “)

      • This is the first and only piece of yours I have read so far. I must admit, I am intrigued. I stumbled upon you only because you were online (so few are at one time, I have found). But I like it very much; you made me smile with your shots at Cupid, and oh, yes, th little fucker has messed up so many lives, yes? However, I have ulterior motives as well. I am trolling for writers who use audio in their work. We now have a new category for what we do here: Spoken Word, and I am looking for those of us who do that. If so, or you just want to explore the possibilities, hit me back and let’s talk. I think you know HER; aske her about it.

        • Thank you for reaching out and telling me about it. And thank for reading my silly scribbles.
          Yep, he was. I think I have another poem coming with a Cupid as a victim. (Does it seem like I am vengeful toward it?! No? Lol)

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      • I was trying to get a Spoken Word group going here, but that fell through; however, I did manage to get a Spoken Word category for us when we publish pieces — or edit them — if you have audio embedded on the page. We now have a pretty good start at a Spoken Word library if you check it out. Jut choose CATEGORIES on the main banner, then Spoken Word on the dropdown.

      • Moving verse with mystery woven in.
        Regards James

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      Something Within

      Something... that is, lurks within  my mind and body.   Whatever it is, it has been elusive, and destructive!   It is formless... that is, IT embodies any part of my body...   IT's heartbeat  within my brain, IT's tentacles flared!   I have lost too much... I have lost friends... I have lost family...   I have lost...

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      Quivering Shadows Within

      Hold a lit candle beside me, as the flame flickers, you witness  the distortions of shadows on my flesh.   But what if I allowed you to look deeper? By some magic bring that candleflame into this body that is not quite pieced together?   (Sighs)...

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      Lust Glittered Vainly In Your Eyes

      I found myself in your eyes.It was not a reflection.I saw lust glittered at what you had. I was never for you.The lilac heat of lovedid not exist in my eyes. You wanted me,it was infatuation at first sight!But...

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      Backstage (White Lion - There Is Life, Even After A Broken Heart)

      Welcome Backstage, I’m Damian DeadLove. Tonights band is the one and only, White Lion. This is a phenomenal group in my opinion, very underrated as musicians and songwriters. You have to understand something. One of the heaviest guys I know,...

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      • Outstanding piece Damian. Not a favorite band of mine, but your passion and detail to this band is quite impressive. Well said!

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Music is like that, we all have different tastes. Some we agree, others, not so much. lol. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • This was amazing and informative. I like that little extra note of why you like that note

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It was an amazing story in the sense that I was able to tie in a personal experience. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Yes, another White Lion fan. You’re most welcome. Appreciate you.

        Damian

      • I always love a band that when you listen to them they take you back in time. Great write.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Yeah, it’s a special band when attached to a great memory. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Very informative. Excellent work.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • This took me so many places. From countless hours watching MTV to meeting, speaking with & shaking hands with the reporter from South Africa who was friends with Stephen Biko…the movie Cry Freedom. I had forgotten that White Lion did a song about apartheid with a similar title to the movie. Some truly incredible talent blossomed & hit the scene in the 80s. I’m so glad you’re highlighting them, my friend

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the story my friend. It’s a great song, actually. I vaguely remember that movie, Stephen Biko? Oh yes, Peter Gabriel, had a song called: Biko. You can see the issues of the time, writers make that happen. Yes, the 80’s get a bad rap sometimes, when it was actually a really creative era. Your welcome.. Appreciate you.

          Damian

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