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      The Rain Poems

      Two toddlers wore rain In the yard, in the fogof a heavy downpour,two toddlers wore the rainlike tight-fitted jeans, which clung to them so soggy, and yet in moments of gleewith a spin and a spree they giggled and laughed,a thousand thuds, as each...

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      • Phenomenally penned, Tim. Another fantastic collection my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

        Damian

      • hello dearest Tim I wonder besides rain what these poems have in them that weave them together there is something ominous I can sense… great write 💕

      • Ahhh! 🌧

        What could be better, My Good Friend Tim, than a captivating soliloquy of imaginative Free Verse poetry from the rainbow of your dancing pen, creatively presenting the wonders of “Rain” to fill and soothe our parched imaginations.

        Nice rhymes ‘n imagery in Poem 1, and your artwork choice sets the perfect mood.
        I enjoyed each offering … particularly:

        “For an hour, the sky recites
        poems from heaven
        and I listen…mesmerized.”

        Outside my window, rain’s forecast today … I’m keeping my best umbrella and shiny red boots handy!
        Good stuff, Syr Poet … much enjoyed, as usual! ⁓ Rascal🖌

        150/100

        • Haha, shiny red boots? Thank you Richard, your comments are always entertaining and interesting. It’s always good to know there’s a master of poetry around. 🙂

      • Quite a collection, Sir Tim.
        Especially the woman in the window piece. Yet, the beginning obviously draws the reader in, with the vivid imagery. Well stocked stack of art, this.
        And good to see you here.

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      Drifting...

      listen...I’m nothing specialbelieve me...just a woman stunted in her youthstill figuring out what that meansand how to finally grow I have no answersno cosmic brillianceI simply have my lifealways muddling alongoccasionally strongsometimes weakand often wrongthis is all I know I don’t...

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      • Truth 🙏🌼

      • Thank you 😊

      • Brilliantly penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! So much truth in this write my friend. There are multiple sources to learn from, and everybody has something new they can learn. Kindred spirts, I connect with this. Appreciate you.

        Damian

        • This one goes back to 2016. Had to dust her off & bring her into daylight again. The problem with learning from only one source is the bias that becomes inherent in it. Probably why this world is in such bad shape now. Everyone believes their way is the only way. And the users take full advantage of that. Thank you, my friend

      • hello beautiful Willow I think in a large part you have a loving and tender heart and some people don’t we encounter them and sometimes deeply resent these people but I am like you thinking there is a lesson in even that…it’s just not always easy to see… you are emotionally gorgeous and people who don’t get are too young to great write 💕

        • I don’t think we truly grown without all those lessons. Some of the lessons suck stinky eggs, but we still learn. Thank you, beautiful 🧡

      • I think, in one way or another, that most have some important qualities. Well done. .

        • Having a mind open enough to recognize it is where many fail at seeing those facets. Thank you 😊

      • Powerful work. Tremendous

      • I hate the thought of just how selfish and unempathetic people have become. We should all stay humble and never look down on others.

        Great ink

        • I think it’s human nature to fall in with the masses. Just some of us can’t unsee…& seeing makes it all that much harder to swallow the kool-aid. Thank you 😊

      • Girl, you don’t even know how much strength I’ve gained just in knowing you. Thank you, my fellow warrior!

      • Bravo, hun, bravo!!!

        Luvin this!!!

        • I burned my filters, remember? The flame is still lit…I’m just warming up

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      Commenting is Fixed

      Yes you read it correctly.  Commenting has been fixed.Thank you all with bearing with us as we correct the issue

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      My Nightmare of Childhood

      Nightmarish! Every night I'm visited by the cold hands of my past.   Nightmares! This unending cycle of victimhood, I fear will never end.   Nightmare! One bad memory in one bad dream, I will have forever.

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