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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
Not wanting to offend
What had happened on the roofHolding pasts in a box
We crawl, we stand, then walk
Rusty keys enter locks
Speaking words before caughtStreams of tears without sound
Lover’s end, rings withdrawn
heartbeat forever unbound
Dawn shows you were a p…Read More2 Comments-
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Thank you
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Read MoreSO YOU WANT MORE? (This is a sequel/part two to both...BODY PAINT TIME and THE NEW TENANT). I bring together my agoraphobic neighbor Mags (Body Paint Time) and Jaz (The New Tenant) - Enjoy the sex! -------- The day after Jaz moved...
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Read MoreThe New TenantThe tiny ebony chick was new to my building. Most tenants fall into 3 categories: sex offender, addict or mental case. I cross categories. I'm an addicted, sex addict and a nutcase!I could tell she had issues. I...
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Can I borrow your bandana?
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Read MoreMirrors mirroring not what mirrors mirror. Drinking this mirage, emulating my form. Echoes of reflecting thoughts exuding an air of sorrow. The presences within the glass, weeps deeply at its glassy heart. A blind man I am, staring into this mirror. Blinded in darkness, yet sighting the pain. These curtained eyes, sightful...
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Thanks. It’s a wonder publishers nor agents are getting back to me to publish my work. Read your piece: Brutal. Very deep and kept me hooked.
Daniel
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Beautiful Daniel. Love the flow and wordplay in this!
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Read MoreThe phantom voices are soundless unsoundness to the normal world. With my own tongue, psychosis cracks this lash, scolding the empty air. Give one hell, give another heaven, but where is my heaven? Fracture this jawbone - this jabbering embarrassment within my vacant face! Raked over hellish coals, blistering with utterances, my mind...
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I feel you dearest Daniel beautiful expression and powerful ❤️
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Okay, Fia 👌 Thanks for your submission and participation. You’ve made a very good start, with the basic format of a Sonnet down pat … 3 Quatrains and a Rhyming Couplet, and your rhyme-scheme is spot-on. In particular, your topic is interesting, with emotion depth, strong metaphorical imagery, and captivating ambiance that sets the mood. With a b…Read More