Lock out of love and the softest thing is the pillow as bars.

Your reply is better than the poem. THank you, Fia.
j.

Fabulous been there done that
Loved it I can relate

Lots of truth in this, j. Great metaphor.

Not exactly the plan: a double bed, the making and filling of it should be, can be, a nest made by two for two, a love-in forever. Fine writing, fine metaphor as ever, sir jacob.

A less than warm bed room scene, just missing the Keep Out sign. Relatable to many dear J. The blues indeed. Great metaphors as usual.

Chris

Cleverly penned, Jacob. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

There is a great pain in words
And there is also joy.

A really moving piece.

Regards James

Emily Dickinson once said “Words have the power to kill, they also have the power to heal.”
And here it is the former that occurs.
j.

There is nothing quite like the sting of harsh well placed words. We humans can make weapons out of everything. Still, an ugly truth is less harmful than a pretty lie. Excellent write!

Given the state of the world, there are consequences to actions.
Nice spill.

I’m a mad, mad man… that is catchy.
It seems that it states take me or leave me, but I am not changing.

Well like the great philosopher Popeye once said “I Yam What I Yam” haha.

Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.