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Read MoreI could write him a love poembut if I get it right...you wouldn't recognize it ...not for what it really was none of those butterfly wings ...tickling the tummyno sweet comparison to cotton candy nah...it's nothing like that when he says my name...I go...
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It’s a gift beyond measure. Thank you
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hello beautiful Willow a very sexy and passionate write I understand about him alone having the key but in my case it is of a divine origin my man that you have such in the flesh is beautiful 💕
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It’s so beautiful that I have no words. Thank you, beautiful 🧡
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Beautifully executed. I love how you say it is not recognized by butterfly wings
Not everyone will see the key.
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Not everyone is meant to. That’s why there’s only one. Thank you
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Beautifully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! Love the layers in this piece, your writes are authentically you my friend. I’m a huge fan, amazing work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I wouldn’t even know how not to be authentic at this point. Good or bad, I am what I am. Who knows where it will go next? Thank you, my friend
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I don’t need butterflies, honestly. What we have is more powerful than their fragile wings. Thank you, girl
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This is so so smooth, exciting and textured. I love it!, Ain’t nothing like having your own🌹
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Nope, there isn’t. Thank you 😊
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This vibe is so, so sensual and moving. The connection….so deep and meaningful.
Just exquisite!!
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Thank you, my friend
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This is a beautiful poetic eulogy, crimsin
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hello beautiful Fia thank you graciously he will be missed I only saw him in concert once I was in the second row center and he aimed his foam gun on me and I ducked behind my husband he seemed to get a kick out of it…I thought the prince of darkness should be remembered here,,. thank you for the love on this write 💕
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. What a nice tribute to, Ozzy, my friend. Really love the use of song titles, this is an amazing write. He was one of a kind, and his music will live forever. Losing the artists that were part of my life’s soundtrack is very sad indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I’m so happy this resonated with you he truly was and is one of a kind 💕
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Legend
BIG
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hello dearest Poet good morning yes he was thank you graciously for the love on this 💕
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Black Sabbath were pioneers and the reason heavy metal exists. Ozzy has so many good songs in his solo archives. He will be missed by millions. Nice tribute. He did indeed give us his blood and love.
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hello dearest Tim indeed they were at the time there was no one like them and neither will there ever be again he will be missed thank you for helping me remember him 💕
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Read MoreSummer is gone, I’m afraid.And so are the remnants of you. That part isn’t such a loss though,because you broke my heart in two. How I long for the days of normalcy..And just maybe I can get back to thatNow that...
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Mic Drop!
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You’re too kind, Damian.
xx
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Ouch…… someone done you wrong.
Good write and after summer comes autumn,winter and spring….don’t be duped when a new summer arrives.
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Fool me once, shame on you 😏
Thank you Peter❤️
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I like to think so too ☺️ as always Adira, I appreciate your kind words.
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Yes, this summer is new you and your strength cannot be denied. Love this piece you put out.
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Next time around it’s your turn to retaliate. Take names and kick ass! Amazing poetry PG.
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Seductively penned, Brenda. Fantastic writing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you 💕
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You are without a doubt, the Queen of Darkness & Lust. Your pen, weaves magic and this piece is no exception. I love everything you’ve written here, you know I do.
Love you, Brenda
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hello lovely Jackie thank you my sister for such a beautiful comment forgive my delayed response I went through a couple down days I cherish you 💕
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hello beautiful Mary yes it is this is poetic lust which is intoxicating I deeply appreciate you 💕
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Read MoreYour inconsistencies are consistentHappy yet state your sadAngry but seem to be gladRelaxed but wound tightWant to be gentle yet you biteNo one understandsNo one took the timeNo one gave a shitAlways left behindWeeping from rageSpilling into the calm...
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Intriguing…
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Thank you, willow
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I like the contrast you used in some verses. Dark thoughts indeed. Well done, Fia!
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Thank you, M.E appreciate that
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend, with dark vibes very present. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. was in the zone.
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Thank you, Adira;))
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Fantatic!
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Thank you, Adagio
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G’Mornin’, Fia 🌤️
Good title, and what a great lead-in with V1’s frustrating contradictions setting the mood for what’s to come (L2, make it “you’re” sad).
Boy howdy! You sure know how to express the angst so many of us have had to endure and overcome; yet, it seems some never do … sadly so.You’re such a creative writer, Ria: I admire your keen ability to weave vivid imagery and emotion throughout every verse and in the use of spot-on rhymes, timely line-breaks, and smooth flow.
Excellent wrap-up verse, too. For rhyme’s sake with “despair,” consider using “there” rather than “here” (just a thought).“Wake, wake from this despair! (great poe-esque touch)
It is me you’re talking to …
no one else is there.”Fia, you’re such a joy to read and share with. 🌈
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Thank you so much for the compliment and comment. Richard I appreciate it
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Oh, sure thing, Fia!
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Yes, it has been changed. Ty ;))
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You misunderstood, Fia … I meant to change L4 to “there”. Not L2, which was fine as “despair”.
So “despair” and “there” rhyme.
(like this)
Still, you find me in your dreams
Wake, wake from this despair
It is me you’re talking to
No one else is there.
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Very captivating.
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Thank you, CasketSharpe;))
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Thank you, Steven;))
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Sounds like a harmonious relationship to me. Good write 🌼