The want and the holding back are tormenting. Nicely done

Thank you SeaCat!

Wonderfully written. I could feel the warmth of the fire!

Fantastic!

You always put the perfect image with your poems. Love this.

Powerful work. Superb.

Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Elegant wording and oh, so sensual.

Love making is much more than the physical act, especially when the hearts speak to each other so loudly.
j.

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

There is an effortlessness to you now. You keep glowing, Crim…

Really wonderfully written. I love the third stanza in particular…powerful vulnerability

Watching is good but being caught is better.
Terrific succinct and titillating piece.
😜

I have done a fair amount of cursing in my day, Fia.
But the muse turns a blind ear.
j.

Sometimes it feels like certain people are drawn into your life for different reasons, not always for communication or connection, but for maybe even deeper philosophical meanings than even those can provide (I recommend all the Stoics, of course) It always pays to patient…and observant. Good form and thoughtfulness.

Brilliantly penned, Fia. Always dig your musings my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Thank you ;))

A very striking and succinct piece. A fire burns in these verses.
Regards James

Your writing always conveys your emotions very precisely, emotionally. I mean this: many thanks for sharing what appear to be deep, deep feelings. Can only hope that time will lessen the pain felt as soon as can, Fia.