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hello dearest John wow that’s a beautiful comment thank you graciously 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Great dark poetry my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I deeply appreciate hearing from you… you make my day 💕
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Read MoreWhen heat rises off your body and it's not from Passion When you struggle to find the words any words because you lost your voice When tiny beads of sweat escape not from pores, indicating it's time The Great Wall of Fia...
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hello beautiful Fia I’m sorry you’re feeling icky I hope yu feel better soon drink some green tea with a little tumeric it should help 💕great write
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Thank you, crimsin. add the turmeric to the tea?
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make it like an english tea a little creamer, green tea, a half teaspoon of turmeric in the hot tea you will feel better the tumeric helps with body aches and you don’t tasted it in the tea…I know it sounds weird but it’s good…
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Thank you, Ravens:)
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Get well…..words need to be written.
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Thank you, Peter. Appreciate that
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Get well, Fia. Even when you’re sick, you write incredibly. Get so me rest my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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Fia very sorry for your ailment. But you sure wrote a fantastic poem about it. Digs deep and you really made it an engaging read. Hope this comment finds you feeling better.
John
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Thank you, goldenmist
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Sickness is sometimes like love. You don’t know if your coming or going.
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Thank you, Casket. I sure did not know what was going on.
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Terrific write, just be careful that pain doesn’t become pleasurable.
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hello dearest Benny I understand what you mean my pain is beguiling thank you for the advise 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend, just keep moving forward. It’s easier said than done I know, but eventually the clouds will part, and let in the light. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian yesterday was just a hard day thank you for the words of encouragement 💕
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Moods often bring darkness that is hard to swallow.
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hello dearest Adagio thank you my friend for being here I hope you listened to the song 💕 it is haunting…
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I did.
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Read MoreI am lost in the flame, all burnt up. With a fire lit beneath my palm, And at the fingertips, I aim true to twist and turn my delight, Upside down, lost in her beckoning sight It’s her hot-lipped fire I see all around Yet...
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Passionately penned, Fia & Darrow. Incredible collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. 😊
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hello beautiful Fia and poet I’m not familiar with this is one of the best collabs. I’ve read in some time 💕
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Thank you, crimsin. We did this collab on DUP and he said to post it there and I enjoyed it. I posted it here. Not sure if he will find his way here. He may…
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Thank you, Raven xoxo
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Agree with Raven. That is one helluva solid landing at the end
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Thank you, Willow xoxo
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Some endings never end, others end before they’ve really begun, but always the questions remain. Well played 🌼
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Thank you, Average Joe xoxo
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Powerfully penned, Fia. You stuck the ending my friend, love the sleight of hand on the last line. Very clever, indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian xoxo
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This is an emotional tour de force of dark poetry my friend. You captivate me with this darkly lit poem. A real work of art.
John