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Read MoreI watch themwitness them on streetsbenchestrains their heads in the cloudsfloatingtheir eyes compelledto stare intocell phone screenssoaking up dopaminelike hummingbirdshovering above nectar they roam like cloudsfrom here to thereseemingly unawareof buildingsof traffic until they've slipped byout of sight replacedby other clouds
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Yes, Exactly. Thank you, J.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Remember when just finding change for the pay phone was the goal to call someone. Now its like your always reachable. No one disconnects. Nice poem
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I remember those good old days well. lol Thanks you, Fia. 🙂
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Tim. Dig the nostalgic flavor of this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I appreciate all the comments, Damian. I’ll be by your way soon. 🙂
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
The want and the holding back are tormenting. Nicely done
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![Profile picture of RPM]()
Thank you SeaCat!
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![Profile picture of RPM]()
Wonderfully written. I could feel the warmth of the fire!
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thank you graciously ❤️
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![Profile picture of Atticus Abbey]()
Fantastic!
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you dearest Adagio ❤️
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
You always put the perfect image with your poems. Love this.
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you beautiful ❤️
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Powerful work. Superb.
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you dearest Thomas ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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![Profile picture of Jacob erin-cilberto]()
Elegant wording and oh, so sensual.
Love making is much more than the physical act, especially when the hearts speak to each other so loudly.
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you graciously dearest Jacob ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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There is an effortlessness to you now. You keep glowing, Crim…
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you dearest Benjamin that is beautiful to me ❤️
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![Profile picture of RPM]()
Really wonderfully written. I love the third stanza in particular…powerful vulnerability
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thank you graciously dearest RPM ❤️
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Watching is good but being caught is better.
Terrific succinct and titillating piece.
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Thank you, Peter! Grateful for your reading!
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Most on cell phones being anywhere else besides where they actually are.
j.