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    dreamer

    squanders the day wandering through my thoughtsjumping from one cloud to another with none to sustain methen falling into the darker crevices where I begin dreamingthat's when I feel them, the demonsmy soul shrinks back and I gather my...

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    • As we read this we think of our darkness and how it hungers always for more. We constantly watched for the slightest weakness, even inattention is a weakness. But to have it’s icy call within our darkness and acceptance, deeelish

      • hello dearest Me I think of the parst of space that are empty I find peace there it is a heavy dark… there I can be myself I go wandering…someday when I pass from this dominion I hope to explore other plains of existence thank you so much for you very apt comment ❤️

    • Hoi hoi Chère C.,
      Love the write.
      And love the artwork too.
      Kind regards, Gus

      • hello dearest Gus good evening thank you most graciously I love the picture as well I thought it went well with the poem ❤️

    • This reads more like a short story then a poem. I love it. The darkness and moodiness crawls into my skin. As I read, I love the atmosphere you created with your words and with the image. Marvelous Brenda. xo

      • good morning dearest Keith I think you’re right I should have listed it as a series it well be part of a bigger story thank you gracioulsy for taking in the mood ❤️

    • Father, I confess to ink the silence, haunting the moonless nights. Well done, Brenda.

      • thank you graciously dearest Adagio for a very beautifully poetic comment ❤️

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    perpetuity with the talented Adagio

    with confusing dark my artistry comes forthto wrap around and conjure you forthmy fate dealt I think to take you with me assaulted desire weepsin the salty rain reapthe lovely flowers of the field grin for the sake of heavenwho is...

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    • Thank you for allowing my ink to splatter, Brenda. I don’t know why we don’t team-up more often. My dirge is available even in the throes of my tuna casserole.

      • hello dearest Adagio it’s always a pleasure to write with you and we will do more collaborations I’m sure I’m really pleased how this one came out thank you ❤️

    • This is good. The flow is nicely done. Nice job to both of you.

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    jilted

    feeling it all I dwell in the paineach infliction fills me with desirescreaming hurt I'm in love with youyou love me but you're not in love with meyou push me away, then pull me backwith encouragement, I'm getting closer...

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    faded

    I'm dreaming in colorsfading friends and ideasthey emerge when I createquietly reminding me about what I thinkwhat troubles my mindmy thoughts find all of you a lotmy loneliness cradles me I miss you greatlya faded kiss from long agoyou...

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    • Marvelous write Brenda. You always capture the emotions and feelings so perfectly.

    • hello beautiful one thank you graciously for the love her it’s felt ❤️

    • Who’s to say when our godhead or universe should speak to each of us. There may be an unknown equation that determines when the voices appear. Is it possible that others are impersonating our universe and we’re reacting to feedback. Just a question Lady, tight

    • God as I understand him created the demons…they are a part of our universe…God himself is very dark look at the world and even nature it’s not hard to tell when he is pissed off just people pretend they don’t…he has instruments of darkness to experience the other aspects of his personality as well as being kind humble and a genius… when I complain about innocence he tells me you don’t know that being or what they need… so there it is the way I understand things ❤️

    • you too sweet lady good morning ❤️

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    In the throes of Erection

    It was on a sultry Sunday.after almost45 minutesof passionate delaythe towerwhich swayed to and froby ropesfinally sat atop the church erect. You thought Imeant somethingelse didn't you?

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