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great stuff, you two. Done just right. Plenty of descriptive moments to build the character into an active existence.
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Yes he did i thought he would have been more in the song instead of the back ground. Its still a good song
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He was giving Eddie his moment to shine. Rick was already established. Ode fact: Rick James and Neil Young were in a band together called the Mynah Birds. Circa: 1964 to 1967. They did not release an album though.
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Well damn this is intense and written with passion. The ending gave it softness and tenderness. loved it
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Chère PG.,
Hope this finds you well?!What a gentle ending you’ve made of this.
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Powerfully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend. I always dig the layers in your work, fantastic storytelling, tied together with the conclusion of being in a better state of being by the end. Nicely done per usual, I’m a fan. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Dear B and S_D,
You capture and blend the essence and passion of women, earth and Mother Earth in this sizzling write. I enjoyed the ebb and flow of this work and how the process of collaborating yields great story telling. Congratulations to you both. H 🌷