Wow! This is so dark and beautiful! What a bittersweet bloom.

Thank you.

Hauntingly beautiful! The well chosen imagery succeeds in creating a cold and hurting atmosphere with words that cut like ice shards. Great job here!

Passionately penned, Fia. Excellent storytelling per usual my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Chère F.,
Lovely to see you have posted again.

And, while my tongue seems to have a will of its own, who needs Valentine if we can have this?

Also poem-wise, I’m hungry for more!
Warm regards, Gus

This is a very well told story, dear Fía. It awakens the curiosity of your readers and keep it up. I can hardly wait to read the sequel!

Hahaha, tis is so real and we’re thinking you incorporated some truth in this, tight one Lady

Kind of story I come back from sun basking in Gran Canaria for! Superb writing, Fia, and much enjoyed.

Heart-warming and affectionate piece.

Emotionally unraveling throughout.

I’m glad it had a sweet, happy ending.

I had a feeling that disaster might strike, but instead all safe and well. x

Very nice structure and flow, holly shitt ur good

This one bleeds ink and teeth—raw, unashamed of its own hunger and haunt.
You don’t pretty up the blues here; you bite down on them and grin through the bruise.

Thank you, Thomas.

Hi Atticus,
I’m with Thomas W. case. His comment being a poem in itself.

Yours is almost an abstract landscape of lust. Love it a lot.
Kind regards, Gus

Your poem shines in raw, haunting and intense beauty,. You’re a master of metaphors, my friend!

Thank you, Elke.

spurting, telling x

Thank you, Jacqui.