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Read More1.So now, you seek a primer—after years of painting—Without enough sanding,Drowning in the paradox of colors.2.There is enough paint in here (my heart) to fill that emptiness.I opened it like Pandora’s box.3.Armed to the teeth with brushes and rollers,Stripped...
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Thank you, Damian! Appreciated! “)
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Very interesting dialogue. Is this internal or external?
It is not about painting, I agree. nice work-
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External inspiration, internal conversation. 50/50 hehehe. I was painting a wall at home and using the process to write.
Thank you Fia! “)
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Tremendous metaphor. Superb work.
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Thank you brother! I appreciate it! “)
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Thank you my friend!! I appreciate it “) <3
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This piece is worded so well. Great description and a wonderful imagination here. Nice work.
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Thank you, brother! I appreciate it “)
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Thank you, Rosie C for the love and comment! “)
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This is deeply, thought-provoking.
I like the use of numbers in this. It makes it look like a list in the structure of a poem.
It’s different and inspiring. I can sense a lot of patience from the writer in this piece.
Captivating choice of words. I’m slightly hooked in. x
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Sam Nash wrote a new post
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Read MoreWhat am I a chocolate teapot?An empty sentence without a dot?I melt when you say “hi”And bleed after a final goodbye.I never imagined you would leaveNot caring when my heart you deceive. I didn’t expect I was so useless. I didn’t...
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congratulations all around 💕
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Congrats to all. Appreciate you all.
Damian
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Thank you and congratulations to the others! 😃
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Keep up the intensity. Peace to all
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Thank you! And Congrats fellow poets! “)
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Congrats all….
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Ok let’s begin.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Yes, Thank you for commenting;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. You know how to start a weekend my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yes,lol. Thank you, Damian
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Excellent
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Thank you, Thomas
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Bring it.
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Verses written by delicate nails. Well done! “)
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Beautifully penned, M.E. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian