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Read MoreBefore the memory thaws the northern light So white the scent of frozen silence Caught in the clarity of ancient bite Before the memory thaws
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That’s a good question. Thank you, Brenda.
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The introduction to a poem, and it’s closing line…when they are one in the same, it makes for quite an impact to the reader, at least to me. It looks quite simple, but in reality, there’s a lot of finesse at play. Your image is striking, as well. Great presentation with its brevity. Much enjoyed, Adagio!
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Thank you, Kelly.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
This is my Free verse
Do you hear the sun?
As the rays beat down on the ground,
It is subtle but poignant
It’s purpose is to burn.
The exquisite heat,
does not match the coolness in your eyesDo you smell the wind?
Multicolored in its complexity
Surrounds you,
Invades your very core.
It gives you life.
Then withdraws to take your b…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Beautifully imagined, Fia, an excellent effort!
Deserves a VERY strong title!ISSUES TO CONSIDER:
1. Unnecessarily Capitalizing every line, which tends to confuse when one complete line, thought, etc; begins or ends, effectively stumbling the flow, attention, and overall magical smoothness of a poem’s captive spell.
2. Poetic voice … how a poe…Read More-
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I’ll work on it. Thanks for the guidance
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You make sharing a distinct pleasure. 🙏
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Read More𝒜 𝓂𝑒𝓂𝑜𝓇𝓎 𝑜𝒻 𝒜𝓊𝓉𝓊𝓂𝓃'𝓈 𝓂𝒾𝓈𝓉 𝓌𝒾𝓉𝒽 𝓌𝒽𝒾𝓈𝓅𝑒𝓇 𝑜𝒻 𝒻𝑒𝓇𝓂𝑒𝓃𝓉𝒶𝓉𝒾𝑜𝓃 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝓈𝒸𝑒𝓃𝓉 𝑜𝒻 𝓈𝒶𝓀𝑒'𝓈 𝒷𝓇𝑒𝒶𝓉𝒽𝒷𝑒𝒻𝑜𝓇𝑒 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝒻𝒾𝓇𝓈𝓉 𝓀𝒾𝓈𝓈
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very beautiful dearest Adagio ❤️
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Thank you, Brenda.
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Read MoreStanding at the edge of everlasting anesthesia, unbound by the laws of Neanderthals' and mortal men, shedding the cord of echoes grasping the soul. A singular blue vein glowed in the dust motes dancing beneath the fluorescents, pulsing in...
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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hello dearest Adagio good afternoon this is great I often wonder where the memory goes and then returns ❤️ a thawing perhaps…