Did not know sharks are older than Saturn’s rings. Figures, they are rulers of their domain. This is an interesting piece like the underwater theme. I feel that you are bringing attention to the destruction of the oceans. At least that is what I am getting from this,

hello dearest poet I love the way you wove the rhythm with the words it sounded like an old pirate… sharks terrify me I have had nightmares of being lost at sea swimming among them but I guess I should fear the land sharks more great write 💕

The flow of this…pardon the pun…is amazing. There’s calm & destruction found in the depths of the ocean. Definitely will be returning to read this again

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Enjoying freewill & preferring instruction, that is humility & love there. Whether it’s Him or him. This is strong, Brenda 🧡

Powerfully penned, Brenda. This write has layers my friend, amazing work. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is beautiful. I past days I have tempered your anger

So beautifully powerful, Brenda. This one took me somewhere…

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian