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Also on behalf of Sappho, I would like to thank you for listening.
The lyrics are about something we both care deeply about. And she was the one to write this inspiring poem. And artwork of course.Thank you so much for your very fine compliments. They go a long way!
Kind regards, Sappho and Gus
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Powerful penned, Elke and Gus. Excellent collaboration you two. Great lyrics, Elke and excellent music, Gus. Your guitar tone has a little Neil Young vibe going on. Top notch both of you. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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I bow most reverently to Sappho ‘n Gus 🙏
Stunningly beautiful, You Two, in every sense of the word.
Artwork choice, title, and the Envelope Form in its abba rhyme-scheme (with spot-on and soft rhymes), work perfectly together, just as writing and musical skills came together in rendering this lovely, impacting virtual masterpiece in homage to Mother Earth’s ever dwindling beauty and life sustaining wonders.Simply, an enthralling co-write … love it deeply!
Thank you both! ⁓ Richard🖌Nits:
(Check V1-L3, “get” may have been meant as “yet”. Final stanza, L1, should “plead” be “plea”?) 🤓-
I bow with gratitude to you, dear Richard! A breathtaking comment and the appreciation of a writer like you means a world to me!
I have gratefully implemented your kind suggestions for improvement. As English is not my mother tongue I appreciate this all the more! 🙏
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I’ve written a few from this vein myself and no doubt we’ll write many more, trying to get people to pay attention. The both of you did an amazing job on this. 🙌
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Crimsin wrote a new post
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Chère C.,
It almost looks like as if you are tapping from a different source.
Goes for the art work too.Less black and white with sharp divisions, more dark gradually turning light. I hope my English does what I hope.
I mean it as a compliment anyway. You warm me to your art. Love it a lot!Keep on keeping on said Curtis Mayfield.
Warm regards, Gus
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Ohh this one is as painful as a biting chill on unprotected flesh. Cold is the perfect title. Sending hugs your way, Brenda 🧡
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Chillingly painful with such raw grit, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Crimsin wrote a new post
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with amazing imagery and wordplay my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is one amazing collaboration. WOW! The lyrics, music and image are stellar. Great work here!