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    dear beauty

    dear beauty please bestow on me your essenceso I will glow with the feelinga lovely fountain springs eternal in mesuch succinct endeavor, to garner your favormy thoughts dance on the mistsan ethereal lass before meconjuring my immortal lustswith a...

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    forever

    speaks the night of breath and formcold we turn to stonein our dire hour left aloneno one to atone but ourselvesby this sigh I speakof lost days and full onesmaudlim and melancholy I roamsinister faith, teaches us to hopehonest...

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    I could be a better boyfriend

     The bed thumps rhythmically beneath you while youmake a grocery listand notice the weirdwater stain by the edge of the ceiling fanthe pace increases soyou stifle a half-assed moan and tilt your pelvis and wonderis thisis this…and you wait...

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    • Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Oh-Wow! I absolutely loved this, Betty. Best wishes, Harriet-Jacqui Furl, published erotica author

    • Betty love your writes. Wooo

    • Your pieces are always so stimulating Lady, to tight

    • What! Betty graces us with some creative writing here! Or, also known as Lillith has entered Eden! What!

      “forearm against your pelvis” = Details are everything, and this is exquisitely precise to make it a real moment. That bit of control is boss!
      Well you had mentioned that you were going to concentrate on erotica. So that explains this humdinger of a write!
      The way you make it so realistic, without any overly porn promotion, shows your skill, ahem, at creative writing.
      Good to see you donating to the site. It’s about time!

      • My sweet, innocent brother-from-another-mother.
        No, this was just some older stuff dusted off.
        I have yet to write the porn.
        It’s gonna be like a Gallagher show, you’ll need visqueen sheeting to avoid the splash zone.
        JUST KIDDING…
        Maybe

        Hey, bro, thanks. I fucking adore you. Your critique matters and I really appreciate you for it. Thank you for being a fucking icon.

    • Icon? Don’t be calling me no foreign little car made by Hundai !! I’m tall dammit!
      Okay okay.
      You are a premium writer, Betty. Any site goes up in value with you posting in it. It isn’t always about the subject matter. It’s the technique and ability of the writer that carries the weight. You are gold.

    • Gotta love the raw honesty spilling onto the page without restraint. “Are those your toes curling in the sheets?” it’s that damn good.
      Nice work Betty.

    • LOL, thanks Wally. I appreciate you!

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    hush

    silently simmering inside my dreadalone in the feeling I sulkit is for me to face...the bleakmy sanity doesn't allow deep bondsmy behaviour dictates who sticks aroundthere are those I reachthen the pack gathers round and shames my favored person...

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    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend, it always helps knowing someone understands and has our back. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Chère C.,
      In the Netherlands, we believe that everyone has ‘een rugzakje’. A backpack, but the addition of ‘je’ can’t be translated as far as I know. It’s there to indicate that sometimes it’s heavy and sometimes less. If I make any sense.

      In this rugzakje we all carry things from present and past (mostly).
      The thing for others, is to accept other rugzakjes too. I hear what you say, and at the same time I know that there will be more people who will support and embrace you.

      The days will be getting longer. I hope that more hours of light will strengthen you.

      Warm regards, Gus

    • A great piece written for your husband. Nicely executed!

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