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    Just Being

    The way I feel tonight watching you sleepI love you without words or knowing – Just being. How is it you so transcend the ordinary to me? As if your very scent had made the air come alive. *How long have I loved...

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    • That is a most beautiful reflective piece. Like a goodnight kiss to transcend all others.

    • I’ll let sweet, soft thoughts place the heart as will, does anything else really matter? 🌼

    • Count your blessing while you have the moment. Moments pass all to soon. 🌼

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    Out of Sorts

    A touch babe  I’m distracted with the distance of things     Out of sorts     Though I would not call it so     But lately     Time does seem to keep a strange measure     The day goes not too...

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    • hello dearest Joe this is beautiful I love your own vulnerability here 💕

      • Everyone would like reassurance sometimes. We always say I love you but sometimes our inner child needs to be shown. 🌼

    • Too few actually speak their vulnerability & ask for what’s needed. The beauty in the honesty of this is breathtaking

      • A little honesty saves a lot of heartache. People grow, change, get caught up in different things. Remembering the beginning, when everything was just a dream…is honest measure.🌼

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    An Old Easy Chair

    “What do you want to do tonight?”“I don’t know,” she answered, “what do you want to do?”***ComeSit with me, LoveAnd lay your head on my shoulderYour hair spilling into silk soft pools imbued with the scent of heavenAnd read...

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    The Feeling of Lost

    I watched another sun come upAnd another sun has setAs shadows lengthen into the nightBut nights no darker than the dayAnd my lifeBoth good and badLies wasted in the stainThe feeling of lostWhich cradles me now in emptinessAnd for...

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    • Joe, that is just breathtaking. What an incredible catharsis. I’ve read many things about the disintegration of love, the falling away – but never anything so utterly raw and weeping as this. Such detail and emotion. The final freedom you describe is so anticlimactic, so real in its hollowness. The wound is so visible, the pain so palpable.

      Second person narrative is hugely effective here. It magnifies the emotion of your piece considerably.

      • The beauty of love is all that we imagine. The death of love is never what we thought.
        Thank you for reading (my writes often ramble), and sharing your thoughts and compliments with me.

        Here’s to the sweetness of the dream. 🍻 Cheers!

    • Glad to share my summer and my Joe speak with you. Its funny that one day pain doesn’t hurt anymore, except sometimes. But if it didn’t hurt, was love really real?

      To summer! 🍻 cheers!

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