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Too few actually speak their vulnerability & ask for what’s needed. The beauty in the honesty of this is breathtaking
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Joe, that is just breathtaking. What an incredible catharsis. I’ve read many things about the disintegration of love, the falling away – but never anything so utterly raw and weeping as this. Such detail and emotion. The final freedom you describe is so anticlimactic, so real in its hollowness. The wound is so visible, the pain so palpable.
Second person narrative is hugely effective here. It magnifies the emotion of your piece considerably.
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That is a most beautiful reflective piece. Like a goodnight kiss to transcend all others.