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Read MoreA touch babe I’m distracted with the distance of things Out of sorts Though I would not call it so But lately Time does seem to keep a strange measure The day goes not too...
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Everyone would like reassurance sometimes. We always say I love you but sometimes our inner child needs to be shown. 🌼
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Too few actually speak their vulnerability & ask for what’s needed. The beauty in the honesty of this is breathtaking
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A little honesty saves a lot of heartache. People grow, change, get caught up in different things. Remembering the beginning, when everything was just a dream…is honest measure.🌼
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Read More“What do you want to do tonight?”“I don’t know,” she answered, “what do you want to do?”***ComeSit with me, LoveAnd lay your head on my shoulderYour hair spilling into silk soft pools imbued with the scent of heavenAnd read...
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Read MoreI watched another sun come upAnd another sun has setAs shadows lengthen into the nightBut nights no darker than the dayAnd my lifeBoth good and badLies wasted in the stainThe feeling of lostWhich cradles me now in emptinessAnd for...
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Joe, that is just breathtaking. What an incredible catharsis. I’ve read many things about the disintegration of love, the falling away – but never anything so utterly raw and weeping as this. Such detail and emotion. The final freedom you describe is so anticlimactic, so real in its hollowness. The wound is so visible, the pain so palpable.
Second person narrative is hugely effective here. It magnifies the emotion of your piece considerably.
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The beauty of love is all that we imagine. The death of love is never what we thought.
Thank you for reading (my writes often ramble), and sharing your thoughts and compliments with me.Here’s to the sweetness of the dream. 🍻 Cheers!
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Glad to share my summer and my Joe speak with you. Its funny that one day pain doesn’t hurt anymore, except sometimes. But if it didn’t hurt, was love really real?
To summer! 🍻 cheers!
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hello dearest Joe this is beautiful I love your own vulnerability here 💕