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    Let It Flow

    SometimesMy thoughts just flowFollowing twin streamsThinking about youWhat it would be like to be with youAnd wonderingCould I love you with my heart wide open SometimesI think I’ll never grow upOther timesThat I’ll never grow oldBut time keeps passing by...

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    • I am old school. Grew into a love of poetry because of my interaction with the Beat poets. Sexton, Plath, Ginsberg, Ferlinghetti, O’Hara and others.
      This is confessional style poetry like Sexton, Plath, Levertov and others.
      I really felt this one.
      j.

      • Not many speak of Beat poets nowadays. The cutting edge has become forgotten. I’m honored by the comparison, although I don’t feel I fit the measure. Thank you.

    • It does feel confessional in the way that poets dream about life & love, with a tenderness and unabashed desire both calm & brave. It is what the artform exists for.

    • This poem feels like a quiet stream of thought turning into a river of longing. I love how it moves between vulnerability and hope–questions of love, time, and becoming a better self flow together with such tender honesty.

      • Much of my writing is stream of thought. Loving someone because of how they make you feel, then easily becomes, what do I want these feelings – this person want to make me become…thank you for sharing your thoughts and appreciation 🌼

    • Joe, amigo what a write!
      It felt like wearing an old comfy shirt. I love that line. It’s so true. Personally when it comes to relationships I think comfortable is underrated. Yes, we want to be desired and have great chemistry, but comfort is real.
      It also means you feel safe. So important for love
      Beautifully written

      • You’re always too kind (but I don’t mind).
        Comfortable, at peace, safe, those are priceless feelings.
        I’m glad you found yours. Its hard for us “bull in a China shop” types. 🌼

    • I haven’t posted.much in a while but I’m glad the blessings pleased you 🌼

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    Ours

    “America will never be destroyed from the outside. If we falter and lose our freedoms, it will be because we destroyed ourselves.”― Abraham Lincoln*Ours is the day.The fault lines have been laid bare.A sifting has begun.Lawfare is the prelude to...

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    Seaside

    The seaThe gentle lap of wavesWash upon boards weathered graySome split or warpedAlong the dockStrung with fenders of plastic, and tiresNear the end, of hempWorn and batteredAnd I wonder when, if ever, all of this was newSalt air and...

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    • hello dearest Joe this is so beautiful how you envision this lady my face is open and my laughter sweet…I can’t lie it shows on my face so I try to be honest as I can but that can unsettle too…you’re very romantic to be seen as such is so passionate 💕

    • You took us there, I swear. It was like watching a scene breathe before you. Emotion-filled atmosphere & the sound of the surf. Incredibly beautiful

    • What a great read for me this evening. Very beautifully done, lulling in a good way. Like a sailboat easing along the waves.
      So well done. I love it!

    • This is quite breathtaking and intriguing.

      I admire the delicate flow of this poem, it really does take me on a journey.

      A much needed break from reality.

      A vibrant and comforting read. x

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