oh beautiful Fia I can feel your giving heart here so lovely ❤️

Pure compassion here

Perfect! You going to do vocals for it?? Do it!
This is a catchy, lovable song! I love it! You did great!

This is catchy and I loved how you ended it.
Being a home for love is such a lovely thought:)
Singing about it is even better!

Ana 1 ana 2 ana 3 ana 4 Wooooo yeah There are things I wanted to show
so I took off my clothes and then…..Well….anyway, not bad lyrics.
I’d love to hear a melody to it. Nice one Fia. 🙂

Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent lyrics my friend. A lovely and compassionate write indeed. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

Thank you Damian 😊 🧡

Initially I get the feeling of a horror movie, as though Vincent Price were inviting us into his own darkness. By the end though it feels more hellish. More sinister, and more serious. This is a dark one Crimsin.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. An excellent write with many layers my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

I haven’t read something that made me feel, “Wow, I feel EXACTLY like this to someone right now, nothing good could come of it, I don’t understand why I’d even draw them to me, I’ve nothing to offer, just darkness, and they’re made of light, so I’d blot them out.” This was like reading the words of my own heart, like, why, my friend, when you’re so, sooo high above me in every way would you ever want to drown in my bipolar type ii complex PTSD pit of despair! Don’t want me out of pity, you’ll regret it, and how will you ever find the Mr. Right you so deserve when you’re spending all your time and energy on the Mr. Wrong that I am?? Oh, gosh, did this ever hit me right in my chest… an amazing write, Crimsin. I feel like you snuck up to my metaphorical house and peeked in the window and saw EVERYTHING that is going on!! Crazy, but in the best sort of way!!!

That is a beautiful flower. It draws the eye

The flower did the talking, I just filled in the blanks ..

Thx D

Hey PS. I love this time of year.
There is a jasmine vine next door that blooms every spring.
It’s so fragrant I can smell it all the way to my place.
Nice to see ya around amigo!

It’s pretty awesome when nature rocks our world with scent and visuals …
I was minding my own business walking my dog when I saw these beauties …

Hope all is well

This amigo write’s occasionally now

Doing a lot of collage work too

Permission granted – BE ROMANTIC!
❤️k

Thank you k

Full speed ahead

❤️

I like where this went. Organized religion is a tightrope and shouldn’t be that way. God is within us. Great writing.

Excellent writing Lizz.

I prefer Buddhism myself

Yes. This struggle is internal, not external. Christianity as a kind of perversion of Gnosticism, I’ve encountered this concept more times than I can count ever since I put my tin foil hat on. There is a flavor of that here (Christ as a “spark”….the divine spark) and that caught my eye. Many of us conspiracy kooks have been saying it for years now that the “Anti-Christ” is not a person but the system we’ve been living in (aka “The Beast System”), and I like that you have included that idea here as well. (“It’s the system that blocks what you’ve always seen.”) The main idea behind it is that this place is a people farm, and our energy is being harvested.

Religion has never been a help for me, but Gnostic lore is pretty fire. One thing that IS a more concrete form of guidance on this earthly plane is Stoicism. Practical. Useful. Very real. Ideas that you can actually apply to life. We may need it now more than ever, dealing with them crazy ol’ Archons and their narcissistic idiot Demiurge (the god of the Old Testament)

Very dark, I like this a lot. Is there a song in creation?

Thank you.
Yep 😘