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Read MoreBohemain Womanbohemian woman wild spiriteddaydreaming blues shade her personalityhippie chick her rock n roll styleseductive culinary as she marries flavorsgentle as a flower but powerfulher love of her man fiercenothing stands in the way of itthe wind and air...
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hello dearest Joe smiles I do know this kind of lady she shines ❤️
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I believe she does 🌼
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wrote this poem about me shes a wonderful, beautiful,and talented one of a kind woman
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hello beautiful Lora good morning thank you for just being you and being there for me 💕
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“a lovely hellion of sorts don’t mess with her” love that line.
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thank you graciously lovely Fia I can sense power in you too ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. This is a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning dearest Damian she is one of the people helping me through this time just lovely ❤️
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Outstanding. Your words captivate Brenda. Marvelous!!
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hello dearest Keith thank you graciously she is a captivating woman ❤️
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Read MoreSome say that tears, when shed, are healing Why don't I feel healed then I can tell you why But will you accept the truth Accepting responsibility and showing that you understand Are the steps to move forward There is a problem here Deep rooted Like an old...
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Superb
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Thank you, Thomas 😊
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Love your spacing… very effective emphasis. Second person narrative is such a powerful literary POV, and you’ve taken full advantage. The conversational tone reflects the overwhelming effort to maintain control. The piece is as much about self as it is situational management, and I think the limited information provided makes it all the more relatable.
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Thank you for letting me know that this is a relatable piece. It is not always easy to publish something that you second-guess yourself about. I really appreciate it, DK;))
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You’re right, and it’s important to defer the temptation of providing too much information. Poetry is frequently vague. That’s what makes it beautiful.
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Thank you, Wil;))l
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Powerfully penned, Fia. There is venom in those words my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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Heavy! Like this a lot.
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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This is incredibly raw and honest. The way you describe the tears as rage, not sorrow, feels so real. Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you for reading this. Poemstar
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Brenda, this absolutely breaks the heart. I am sending you so much love & the biggest hug
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hello beautiful Willow thank you hugs back I will be alright I can’t help but write what I feel and everyday my mind is retracing it’a steps to the days we had together and how we got here ❤️
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Powerful work. Heartbreaking.
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hello dearest Thomas thank you for the love on this write ❤️
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Heartbreaking write, Brenda. This is powerfully penned my friend. Sending prayers and positive energy your way. Appreciate you.
Damian
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My deepest condolences to you & your family Brenda. Beautifully written my dear friend. Xox
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Poetspeak and
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Read MoreLike an old man,he stares out over the still and calmat age seven,on the slick, red clayby the edge of the pondwhere his brother slipped and slidaway under the milky, glass surface,bobbing up and downlike a corkon the end...
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I don’t want to be wiping away your smile, girl.
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Different face, different smile from Adira but same effect.
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That’s such an amazing thing to say, Peter. Don’t cut yourself. I want your body unscathed so I can sign my name on your skin.
xoxoxo
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Dark and engaging . Nice spill
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Definitely and thanks!
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Powerfully penned, DK. This is an incredible write with stellar imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian!
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Outstanding. The wording, the image and the sincerity in detail makes this a marvelous piece of writing.
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When I was young, there were two kids that drowned in the pond across the street… brothers.
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WOW! Tragic.
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I will never forget it. Everyone on my street held hands and made a human chain as they walked across the pond. Unreal.
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You are too sweet, girl!
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Deeply felt. Tragic yet majestic at the same time
Much respect
Naaj
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Hey, Naajir! Thanks for the read and comment. I love hearing your thoughts.
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I lost a little brother….🙏
So, this one hits especially close to home, Meg.
Beautifully rendered Free Verse, with all the poetic attributes that make this form so expressively powerful to read and vividly sink one’s mind, heart, emotions, and soul into.No one speaks with a poetic voice like yours!
Thank you ever-so warmly for YOU! ⁓ Richard🖌
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You wouldn’t be knowing anyone like that would you? Enjoyed this my friend, always clever with your words 🌼