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Read MoreHalf baked Petal dreams White flowers Pink seams Blow across Pavement dark Tiny runners No marks Rain drops Hold them down Thunder rolls No other sound
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I get a feeling of thunder and changing energy.
I very much enjoyed reading it.
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Lovely
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A deep, heartfelt write!
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Read MoreLead Speaker and Head of the Society, MalariaLadies … we need to quiet down now… so we can start. Today we have to decide if we are going to accept a new member into our society. We have a new pledge...
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Cleverly penned, Fia. Amazing story my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you ☺️ Damian
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Cool story. Nicely executed!
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Thank you, Keith;))
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loved this
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Thank you, Ambjr ;))
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I really like this one. Nice.
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Thank you, Casket Sharpe;))
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Read MoreGood morning You look terrible today Smile You look so much better when you smile See, it's improved already Your eyes still look sad What is wrong with you today? Smile with your eyes too There you go Now you look happy Before you go, let's practice "I'm fine"
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Hello Green. This is magnificent!! Well said.
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Great write, Green. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreI could never play the pianoThere are too many keysAs my fingers touch I tremble feeling ill at ease“Focus you can do this”I tell my soulBut the teachers disheartening eyesGrips me and wont let goWhen she leavesThe tears begin to...
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hello beautiful Fia this was so beautifully moving my eyes teared 💕
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Thank you, crimsin;))
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I played piano for years but got bored with it being I had no band to play with. Your words here show a timid and shy player developing into a professional with music in their soul. Music moves people. It should be learned by everyone.
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I agree with you. Sometimes when you do not have the right teacher, it would put a person off from even trying to learn to play. Thank you, Tim
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Great write. Emotionally driven. Well done!
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! You know I love writes that involve music my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian ☺️
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I always envied people who could play the piano. I had a friend who played classical by memory & it blew my mind. I only ever had voice. Lovely walk through the keys here
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Thank you, Willow ;))
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This is a very unique vibe, Fia. I like it a lot.
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj;))
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The piano is a beautiful instrument. It has the power to move people to joy and tears.
I enjoyed this poem.
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Thank you, Knight;))
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The last line made me smile. Guitar is my instrument, but I know how overwhelming it can be to learn an instrument. Playing one a little might not be too hard, but playing it well is far, far harder. Nice work, my friend.
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Thank you, Sam ;))
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A beautiful write! The title reminded me of a movie scene that I love. Take Shelter.
Well done, Green!