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Read MoreHow can I competeShe had trained you for her desiresShe tells you to count before you beginYou take deep breaths, trembling You either fear heror you desire her Lust or disgustRides you hard She tells you she wants you to play something...
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Thank you, Jacob ;))
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Fia….I thought it was more about a femdom sorta thing….still good either way.👍
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Haha..well you never know when I could pop a poem like that out. Thank you, Peter;))
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I just can’t imagine any hot blooded music loving fella NOT enjoying this & DEEPLY .. Bravo Mistress F .. Neville 😎👍
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Thank you, Neville.(big smile here);))
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excellent write
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Thank you, twoffthythree ;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Music is a seductive lady, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;)) Music is exactly that,
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Fia this was smoking. I love piano music and this is one of the most creative poems on seduction of a pianist I have read. I felt the flame of his helplessness because her womanly powers. Sizzling.
John
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Thank you, John;))
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crimson, this is sweet. I understand how you feel
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hello beautiful Fia he made me smile so I thought I would share it thank you❤
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. They’re amazing like that, a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I love this piece. You create an excellent and interesting metaphor and you carry it through from beginning to end.
It really works and we feel the relationship between the poem’s subject and the piano.
nicely done, Fia.
j.