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    Musing Tonight

    I have been questioned if I don't seeWhat is going on before meIt's been said that people are afraid to write because the stars are not sitting quite right   They want to remove or put it in a box, Specific themes should...

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    • hello lovely Fia I know you are here for us…I comment a lot and people are responding…at du for a long time I was unpopular because of my schizo episodes and really I couldn’t help it…you would think I woudn’t write duringn those periods but oh no not me lol… thank you dear lady ❤️

    • I think we’re all thankful you’re here, Fia. I always try to comment on other poems when I can. That’s what makes this a community.

    • We all need you Fia… we all need one another… still you are one of a kind

    • Passionately penned, Fia. I always dig your musings my friend. Thank you for everything you do for our community. Appreciate you, cuz.

      Damian

    • Hoi hoi
      I love it a lot how you care for us. And thank you so much for that.

      But am I (being?) out of place when I ask for you to take more time to write goodies for yourself?

      Think of the stewardess in a plane. They point out to first put that mask over your face and after that tend to other people.
      I honestly believe the stewardess’ filosophy. And I hope that I can convince you to become a believer too. Wink wink.

      Please don’t forget yourself.
      Warm regards, Gus

      • No you are not Gus. I do have to schedule more time to write. It has been calling to me and I had to put it on the back burner. I love to write and post. I appreciate you, my friend.

    • I bow to you with gratitude for your tireless dedication to our community, dear Fia!
      For many of us writing is an invaluable contribution to maintaining mental balance. Pouring out your heart in a poem or a story brings great relief and satisfaction.
      I appreciate very much that you cover all topics with your writing. Literature must not be restricted in its freedom of expression!
      Once again, thousands of thanks for all your efforts and your marvelous poetry, my friend!

    • With gratitude and appreciation, I thank you for all that you do and are, Fia. Fearless and honest, your writing inspires us to share parts of ourselves we might otherwise shove aside, forgotten. Thank you, my friend!

      Clay

    • Due to my feral childhood, manners were late being learned. So now I’m a relic from another time who opens doors for people and always says please and thank you. As it applies to writing, I always appreciate it when someone takes the time to read and comment on my work, and will always thank them. Your fine poem is much food for thought, and I embrace every word.

    • Peace to you Fia. You’ve been the core of this site. Your determination, passion and love for poetry, writing and the community here, does not go unnoticed. Keep up the great work you’ve done here on starsrite.

    • That’s how I feel. Poetry is our voice. So many people don’t use that voice or give it up. I know it can get discouraging but it can help someone. Also it just feels good to get those feelings out regardless of subject.

      Wonderful write.

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    silent witness with the talented Adagio

    The wind, a phantom legion, howled its ancient song, Through skeletal branches, where dead leaves clung. A tempest brewed, a symphony of dread, whispering secrets of the long since dead, The house, a wounded beast, with shutters torn and weak,...

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    • This was so perfectly executed that I can’t tell which is whose voice. Powerfully descriptive imagery,both of you 🙌

      • hello beautiful Willow good afternoon thank you graciously for the love on this we both appreciate it deeply ❤️

  • GOODNESS, TFT!
    Now, THAT is a proper Sonnet … it’s obvious you’ve done your homework.
    Your creativity sparks, emotion sings, and diction dances. And, I like your use of elision. Could use a bit’a punctuation.
    See critique and edits below:

    I said I don’t do THIS. POems that behave (STRESS-STRESS / a count long)
    that count their beats and…Read More

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    The Grim Reaper

    The Grim ReaperThe old woman was taking a walk through the forest, like she did every day before breakfast.  She enjoyed the  fresh morning air and the silence. There was hardly anyone outside at this early hour. To her...

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    • Hello Elke. Outstanding story. A stellar piece of writing that captures so much detail and intrigue. A perfect piece for this time of year. Well done my friend. xo

      • Thank you so much for reading and your kind comment, dear Keith! Your comments always tear my heart wide open with gratitude and awe!

    • Quite the riveting tale, Sappho! It was very clever of you to switch up the common portrayals of death and love. I enjoyed all the natural references and surprises you sprinkled throughout this piece. Excellent write, my friend.

      Clay

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    thirst

    somber need bleeding in my soulconjuring the evil in meyou seek redemption in my bloodnever to cry I won't even feel my deathyou'll never touch the honesty of meand for that I'm gratefulinflicted dread I release, may it find...

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