Nailed it in such few words😘

Well written! I should try these more.

I’ve never tried this!
I’m intrigued.

Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. Pretty cool. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

I remember seeing gulls in a Costco parking lot in Denver once and being surprised. A long way from the ocean, they were. I wonder if they ever missed the silence of the sea. Great haiku…I can’t seem to get the hand of writing them myself

hello beautiful Liz this is a very powerful song with a great tempo ❤️

Mic Drop!

hello lovely Liz this is freaking great ❤️you know it’s funny when I was young I went to the churches and never heard God there it wasn’t until later I heard God in nature and it was surprising how different he was than my expectations… this is beautiful ❤️

Hi 👋 thanks 😊 I left religion just after the covid plandemic when I started to realized the God in the sky was a lie.

You are right. God doesn’t talk to us like people actually think. The real god/source is in you in your very breath it’s in everything that lives.

Powerfully penned, Lizz. A very clever write with amazing wordplay my friend. Amazing read. Appreciate you.

Damian

Most rule books are written by fools. A good example are the actors you see in life. At church, the shopping center or on TV. Be who you are and not someone’s marrioette.

The Truth – from Your Heart – great who-gives-a-fuck-what-they-say writing. HJ

This is so good. You should always be you <3

Thank you 😁.

hello lovely Liz I am myself and I will tell you I’m not liked…evern God grows weary of me believe it or not he says I complain to much and he tells me to fuck off sometimes lol..be yourself who else are you going to be? I will continue being me too great write ❤️

Powerfully penned, Lizz. Outstanding write that’s direct and to the point my friend. Never be afraid to be who are you.. I’m flawed myself with lots of quirks as well, I fucking embrace those flaws, because that’s a big part of what makes me who I am. It doesn’t define me it’s just part of me. If that makes sense? lol. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian