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Read MoreA ritual dissection of a malfunctioning oracle I. The Opening of the Cardigan...The autopsy begins not with a scalpelbut with the unbuttoning of Tonal Grump’s cardigana garment woven from misfired metaphors and verbs that refused to conjugate. Inside the lining, the examiners...
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Thank you my dear, I gave it a special treatment in terms of words. I think it is catchy!
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Another excellent write full of depth my friend. I concur with Fia, so many great lines, but the one she quoted is fire brother. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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trying my best… 😊
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Read Morewithin me, without me I miss youseeking secrecy of feelingthen so callous when it comesendearing charm, your nature, and mine togetherWell aware you have othersBut that you wanted one like me surprises mereserved a special place for me, in...
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This is passionate. Like this Crimsin
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thank you beautiful Fia I appreciate hearing your thoughts ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Another excellent write my friend. I concur with Fia. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Aldo Kraas posted in the group Published Authors
Stop before you break God’s heart
People
Because God doesn’t like that at all
Also God want to be respected
By you
Please also don’t mistreat my God
Because he doesn’t like that
Also don’t let God down
If you make a promise to God
You should keep it
God is the one that you created
You in his image
Also you are one of Gods child
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Aldo Kraas posted in the group National Poetry Month
Stop before you break God’s heart
People
Because God doesn’t like that at all
Also God want to be respected
By you
Please also don’t mistreat my God
Because he doesn’t like that
Also don’t let God down
If you make a promise to God
You should keep it
God is the one that you created
You in his image
Also you are one of Gods child
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I am happy that you enjoyed reading my poem
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Read MoreSweet the rain fallThat helps to fall to sleepAt nightWhen I sleepAt night in my bedHow I loveThe sweet soundOf the rainIt is really beautifulYes the night is longIt was made that wayFor me to sleep at nightAlso I...
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What a full day. You took us with you with this poem. Nice.
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Wow there so many good lines in this Par.
“Truth is a pig wearing borrowed logic.”
The corpus callosum negotiates the terms of collapse
I mean wow,