And if junior is a teenager, that brings this whole thing full circle! I mean, how big can a crib be? Several mothers just carried all their infant’s toys to the kitchen for a thorough washing!

I hope coincidence does not bring junior in the crib!

Cool. Thanks HJ for the comments.

Damn, Keith. You went there again my friend. lol. Never know how off-road you’re going to go. Appreciate you.

Damian

Well, let me say this, I am glad I’m not Junior! Also glad I don’t have kids that young anymore you might have given me an idea about the playpen lol.. another write that lives up to the hype! Thanks for sharing Vision. xx
~P.G💋

Powerful work. Vivid painting of the scene.

You have a wild imagination, VOI. I wasn’t expecting a psychotic suicide. But yeah, this is definitely a vision of insanity… true to form!

Appreciate it Dampkitten. Thanks for the feedback.

Well…fuck.. this wasn’t what I was expecting. But damn was it good. Talk about a plot twist! You’ve done it again Vision. I like it! xx
~P.G💋

Vivid and sharp. Very creative.

What have I just read?! Fight club and Identity had a baby poem.
I loved the twist! Well done!

WHAT’S THE FUCKING ISSUE?!?
OK THEN! YOU ASKED FOR IT!!

Felt this deep. Very creative, Keith xoxo

Thanks!

Fight Club vibes, Keith. The Dr. Seuss of horror my friend. Great write. Appreciate you.

Damian

You are HOT as shit, just like always… and I’m all about Tequila.

Now I am drunk on these lines!

E..ve..ry..th..ing!

Intoxicating write, Fia. The room always gets hot when you spill, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

very hot